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Array ( [sid] => 13338 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sleeping Beauty [time] => 2003-02-26 06:40:00 [hometext] => This poem is about someone very close to me and means a lot to me. I do not know what I would do without her in my life. It came to me one night when she fell asleep laying on me in my arms and she was so beautiful and looked so at peace that it was overwhelming to me. She calms me, all my troubles vanish the moment i see her beautiful face. Hope you all enjoy, and let me know what you think.

Exiled [bodytext] => (Sleeping Beauty)


Complacency found within your eyes
taking the revolver from my hand
the sleeping beauty calms my wake
forcing the tears of dust from my face
in an age of nothing
i re-ignite my own intoxication
drowing in the truths uncovered
i can't lose you, it's all or nothing
dare to believe, just one last time
let me in the mists of your beautiful mind
another dream that will never come true
remember the sensation washes over you
standing in the middle of a dead sea
having nothing left but your beliefs
look far ahead there's absolutely nothing
nothing but the sleeping beauty
gone away, hoping for something
complacency found within your eyes
living in a broken lie.
your grow with time, sprouting off a new life
no more are we alone
you stand beside me, in a sea of life
the eyes of angels are upon you
thier wings caresssing your skin
keeping you safe from sin
i love you, just give me a sign
show me what to do
so that i don't lose you
dare to believe, just one last time
staring into your complacent eyes
awaken my sleeping beauty
and see the beauty you bring to life. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 55 [informant] => exiled [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Sleeping Beauty

Contributed by exiled on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



(Sleeping Beauty)


Complacency found within your eyes
taking the revolver from my hand
the sleeping beauty calms my wake
forcing the tears of dust from my face
in an age of nothing
i re-ignite my own intoxication
drowing in the truths uncovered
i can't lose you, it's all or nothing
dare to believe, just one last time
let me in the mists of your beautiful mind
another dream that will never come true
remember the sensation washes over you
standing in the middle of a dead sea
having nothing left but your beliefs
look far ahead there's absolutely nothing
nothing but the sleeping beauty
gone away, hoping for something
complacency found within your eyes
living in a broken lie.
your grow with time, sprouting off a new life
no more are we alone
you stand beside me, in a sea of life
the eyes of angels are upon you
thier wings caresssing your skin
keeping you safe from sin
i love you, just give me a sign
show me what to do
so that i don't lose you
dare to believe, just one last time
staring into your complacent eyes
awaken my sleeping beauty
and see the beauty you bring to life.




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Re: Sleeping Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 08:42:52 AM AEST
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Great poem, What a feeling it must have been and very well put into words


Re: Sleeping Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:11:39 PM AEST
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a truely beautiful soul you speak of....a wonderful portrait for your sleeping beauty. i love this.


Re: Sleeping Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:29:32 PM AEST
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Touching... beautiful.

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: Sleeping Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:24:56 PM AEST
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Great job, simply beautifully written.
Jeff


Re: Sleeping Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Vixen99 on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 07:09:27 PM AEST
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One word - perfect.


Re: Sleeping Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by darkmind on Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 09:27:11 PM AEST
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i hope she wakes up and you get your sign,


Re: Sleeping Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by etherealgurl on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 06:31:08 PM AEST
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this is a sweet, sweet poem! Well written, with nice images and feelings! Bravo!




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