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Nothing Ever Seems To Go Her Way
No One Even Listens To What She Has To Say
She's Always Depressed
Everything Seems To Make Her Stressed
But Who Would Have Guessed
She Feels So Alone
Her Feelings Were Never Shown
She Was Just Another Unknown
No One Seemed To Care About Her
After That It's All Just A Blurr
But They Never Thought This Would Occur
She Can't Take The Pain
Everyone Is Tired Of Listening To Her Complain
Soon Her True Feelings They Will Be Able To Ascertain
She Feels So Betrayed
But She's Not Afraid
She Knows That She Will Eventually Fade
She's Getting Hostile
But She Smiles
For The First Time In A Long While
She Knew What Was Ahead
As She Pointed The Gun Towards Her Head
She Felt Happy At The Thought Of Herself Soon Being Dead
She Blew Her Brains All Over The Wall
Out Of Her Lifeless Hand The Gun Did Fall
What Will Everyone Say When They Get The Call?
Her Name Will Be On The Obituary List
Will She Be Missed?
Or Will They Pretend She Never Did Exist? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 36 [informant] => SugarCoatedSweetness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Dead Girl

Contributed by SugarCoatedSweetness on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She Had Another Bad Day
Nothing Ever Seems To Go Her Way
No One Even Listens To What She Has To Say
She's Always Depressed
Everything Seems To Make Her Stressed
But Who Would Have Guessed
She Feels So Alone
Her Feelings Were Never Shown
She Was Just Another Unknown
No One Seemed To Care About Her
After That It's All Just A Blurr
But They Never Thought This Would Occur
She Can't Take The Pain
Everyone Is Tired Of Listening To Her Complain
Soon Her True Feelings They Will Be Able To Ascertain
She Feels So Betrayed
But She's Not Afraid
She Knows That She Will Eventually Fade
She's Getting Hostile
But She Smiles
For The First Time In A Long While
She Knew What Was Ahead
As She Pointed The Gun Towards Her Head
She Felt Happy At The Thought Of Herself Soon Being Dead
She Blew Her Brains All Over The Wall
Out Of Her Lifeless Hand The Gun Did Fall
What Will Everyone Say When They Get The Call?
Her Name Will Be On The Obituary List
Will She Be Missed?
Or Will They Pretend She Never Did Exist?

Copyright © SugarCoatedSweetness ... [ 2003-02-26 09:20:00]
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Re: Dead Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by SpreadYourWings on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:40:13 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the poem very much! keep up the good work!

Re: Dead Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 02:57:58 PM AEST
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great poem!!!!keep writing

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