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In love with a loner
Contributed by
Percursors
on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I see u walkin home
headphones on
singin 2 yourself
thinkin no ones singin with u
but I am
I hear u through your rude comments
and blistered tongue
I see u through your bleached hair
and baggy jeans
I love u through your silences
and broken home
But I watch you from a safe distance
becuz u r outta my league
only becuz
u cant hear me
only becuz
u cant see me
only becuz
u dont love me
mostly becuz
u dont know how to sing like someones listening
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Percursors
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2003-02-26 10:20:00]
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Re: In love with a loner
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by Dani on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:14:58 AM AEST
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| "u don't know how to sing like someone's listening"... very cool ending... I liked this |
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Re: In love with a loner
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:49:27 PM AEST
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| oh my god...this is exactly like this guy i know! but today i saw him with another girl :( i love the poem... |
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Re: In love with a loner
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 05:40:37 PM AEST
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Wow! What a unique poem! I just love that last line! This is awesome!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: In love with a loner
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 01:07:31 AM AEST
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Very very cool! Absolutely loved it!
Always
Amy |
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