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show everyday with joy.
If We just met
and were "meant-to-be.

If I could save you
save me
be there hand-in-hand
laugh over wine
give Myself
You to me.

If We could dance alone
You and I
feel a world conquered
touch an know.

If I could love you
given the chance
erase what I have become....would I? Vincent

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If I could love You

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 03:21:14 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If I could love you
show everyday with joy.
If We just met
and were "meant-to-be.

If I could save you
save me
be there hand-in-hand
laugh over wine
give Myself
You to me.

If We could dance alone
You and I
feel a world conquered
touch an know.

If I could love you
given the chance
erase what I have become....would I? Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-04-15 03:21:14]
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Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 04:45:17 AM AEST
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well woven words which makes one think and ponder more deeply with the ending:)

nessa

Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 07:30:30 AM AEST
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Usually I would say this was too simple for my taste, but there is utter brilliance in your simplicity here giving this a very modern feel for the romantic piece and not saying more than necessary. Well done, and thanks for sharing starman capturer!

Well Done!

- SCM

Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:14:59 AM AEST
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Many ask those simple questions, everyday...what if.and hmmmm well let me know if you get the answers.......lol.....I liked this write, alot.because it was simple. I love the simple writes, no trying to understand, just there.

Brew~

Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 01:33:35 PM AEST
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That was absolutely beautiful. You have such a way with words....you say so damn much with so little. Thank you for sharing part of yourself.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 01:55:39 PM AEST
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ahh romance is alive and kicking

Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 07:26:55 PM AEST
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Vincent~
My dear poet friend I absolutely adore this one due to its simplicity and how you say so much in so little amount of words. Your poetry is inspiring and leaves the reader wearing a smile. I know this reader enjoys your poetry and always looks forward to when you post a new write. Well done Vincent~
love n hugs,
sue m

Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 05:01:11 AM AEST
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Oh my God the beauty of this brought tears to my eyes hun, I am sorry we missed eachother again this morning damn it! Beautiful write!

~Michelle~

Re: If I could love You (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 10:59:34 AM AEST
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Written with the simplicity that love should flow in and conquer with...well done.

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