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Array ( [sid] => 133740 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Morning [time] => 2007-04-23 00:51:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => and the distinct sound
morning dove awakes
beckons the world
on It`s own.

and should I remember
it has pasted?
remember It will be there..
should I return.

and the breeze
gentle in one`s face
will it return..
can I carry it with me
in my passing,
I will miss it`s fragrance.

and the laughter,
thought of the world
feeling too,
my small space"
thinking a great expanse.

diamonds mark each minute
gold lines the hour,
what is truly in a heart,
a soul?

and a morning...
as brief as the thought. Vincent

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Morning

Contributed by crow on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 12:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

and the distinct sound
morning dove awakes
beckons the world
on It`s own.

and should I remember
it has pasted?
remember It will be there..
should I return.

and the breeze
gentle in one`s face
will it return..
can I carry it with me
in my passing,
I will miss it`s fragrance.

and the laughter,
thought of the world
feeling too,
my small space"
thinking a great expanse.

diamonds mark each minute
gold lines the hour,
what is truly in a heart,
a soul?

and a morning...
as brief as the thought. Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-04-23 00:51:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 01:01:02 AM AEST
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Wonderful thoughts poet. Well conveyed and poetic, hey it's a poem, lol. Awesome job! I am looking forward to more from you, wide eyed wonder.

BRAVO!

- SCM

Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:27:07 AM AEST
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I loved this , flowing and thoughtful leaving with it a moment of calm. The dove I could hear its song. Lovely.

Michelle

Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:37:26 AM AEST
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I so love the way you write. Your style is so unique, so beautiful, so real. Thank you for sharing this kind piece of writing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura (your hippie sis)

Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:51:09 AM AEST
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this is beautiful...

love n' hugs nessa

Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 08:59:10 AM AEST
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Vincent, what a beautiful piece of imagery you've created
for us and so full of emotive thought. You've really captured
the beauty of morning with your sweet words ..

Lovely write.

~Breezy

Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 03:07:35 PM AEST
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An exquisite write my friend. Your appreciation of each moment you experience shines in this piece.

Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by derb on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 10:57:15 AM AEST
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i think poetry is most powerful when a few words convey much. very nice writing.

Re: Morning (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 12:49:23 PM AEST
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Vincent~
Wonderful thoughts put down perfectly with each word and with every line. Your poetry is wonderful and I have come to so much enjoy your writes very much. Each one paints a beautiful picture inside your readers mind.
Well done Vincent and may your mornings always be bright & happy ones~
love & hugs,
sue m

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