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She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.

Spin around and around and around.

She spends her days with her head held high,
Diamond eyes in a diamond sky,
No one ever wonders why,
She never believed.

She spends her nights with her diamond smile,
Knowing morning takes a while,
Wants to walk a thousand miles,
But she will never leave.

Spin around and around and around.

She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.

Spin around and around and around.

He laughs as if he knows the word,
Sky-high shines like a diamond bird,
Never believed in a perfect world,
He just never believed.

Spends his life with thin white lines,
Close his eyes and pretends he’s fine,
No one ever wonders why,
He will never grieve.

Spin around and around and around.

She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.
All along.
All night long.

Spin around and around and around.

Pure white lines, inside they burn,
Now there’s nothing left to learn.

Spin around and around and around and around and around and around and around…

She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.

She breaks
She hates
She waits for morning
She takes
She wakes
She waits for morning
She tastes
She fakes
She waits for morning
All night long.

She waits for morning all night long.

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She Waits

Contributed by Vermilion on Monday, 23rd April 2007 @ 10:01:42 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.

Spin around and around and around.

She spends her days with her head held high,
Diamond eyes in a diamond sky,
No one ever wonders why,
She never believed.

She spends her nights with her diamond smile,
Knowing morning takes a while,
Wants to walk a thousand miles,
But she will never leave.

Spin around and around and around.

She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.

Spin around and around and around.

He laughs as if he knows the word,
Sky-high shines like a diamond bird,
Never believed in a perfect world,
He just never believed.

Spends his life with thin white lines,
Close his eyes and pretends he’s fine,
No one ever wonders why,
He will never grieve.

Spin around and around and around.

She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.
All along.
All night long.

Spin around and around and around.

Pure white lines, inside they burn,
Now there’s nothing left to learn.

Spin around and around and around and around and around and around and around…

She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
She waits
She waits
She waits for morning
All night long.

She breaks
She hates
She waits for morning
She takes
She wakes
She waits for morning
She tastes
She fakes
She waits for morning
All night long.

She waits for morning all night long.

Copyright Â© Vermilion ... [ 2007-04-23 22:01:42]
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Re: She Waits (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 03:49:11 AM AEST
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This was good. i liked the way this was composed and crafted. Good poem.

Take care
Christina

Re: She Waits (User Rating: 1 )
by ediii on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 04:01:43 AM AEST
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i know the waiting for the morning, its the most scary and weird experience ever whne you start to hate the day and live in the night blowin lines all the time and not knowing what else to do. this poem is oh so sad it makes me feel really sorry for you. if you re still using, trust me, being sober (at elast not doing coke ) is so much beter it just takes a lot of time and patience and it hella sucks in the beginning. just consider it. the poem is really good, very interesting structure, like song lyrics. nice flow.

edi

Re: She Waits (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 07:32:47 AM AEST
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tragically beautiful........

love n' hugs nessa

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