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Angels biting
Contributed by
scrivonel
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Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 05:21:09 PM in AEST
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Did you see the angels Biting at my ankles? Making me see things That I didnt want to see Breaking all the shackles Of all my thoughts of life Licking at my open wounds And detailing a truth inside.
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Re: Angels biting
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 09:07:19 PM AEST (User
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I thoroughly enjoyed this write.Put simply and wonderfully. Well done. |
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Re: Angels biting
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 11:16:18 AM AEST (User
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Good Flow |
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Re: Angels biting
(User Rating: 1 ) by Music on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 05:06:08 PM AEST (User
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I feel a Angel biting at me sometimes this was a wonderful read. |
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Re: Angels biting
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 09:35:33 AM AEST (User
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I liked it. it sounds simple but it goes deeper than most think |
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