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DEATH OF AN INFANT DEATH OF A CHILD

PAINFULLY CRUDE AND NEVER MILD

TEARS HELD IN FOR SO MANY YEARS

NOW COME ALIVE WITH JUST A FEW BEERS

THOUGHTS BURRIED AWAY

NOW OUT TO PLAY

DON'T FORGET

OR YOU'LL REGRET

FIGHTING THE TEARS AS THEY FALL UPON THE FLOOR

EMOTIONS RUNNING HIGH MY THOUGHTS DO SOAR

FIGHTING THE PAIN

ONCE AGAIN

WHY DO I DO THIS I ASK MYSELF

AS I PUT MY FEELINGS UPON THE SHELF

NEVER FORGET WHAT DEATH HAS TAKEN AWAY

JUST REMEMBER THEM AS YOU SIT AND PRAY
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REMEMBERED THOUGHTS

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 12:15:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

DEATH OF AN INFANT DEATH OF A CHILD

PAINFULLY CRUDE AND NEVER MILD

TEARS HELD IN FOR SO MANY YEARS

NOW COME ALIVE WITH JUST A FEW BEERS

THOUGHTS BURRIED AWAY

NOW OUT TO PLAY

DON'T FORGET

OR YOU'LL REGRET

FIGHTING THE TEARS AS THEY FALL UPON THE FLOOR

EMOTIONS RUNNING HIGH MY THOUGHTS DO SOAR

FIGHTING THE PAIN

ONCE AGAIN

WHY DO I DO THIS I ASK MYSELF

AS I PUT MY FEELINGS UPON THE SHELF

NEVER FORGET WHAT DEATH HAS TAKEN AWAY

JUST REMEMBER THEM AS YOU SIT AND PRAY

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-05-02 12:15:36]
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Re: REMEMBERED THOUGHTS (User Rating: 1 )
by CuttersAngel on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 12:19:07 PM AEST
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death of a child and infants are very hard to deal with. i have learned this from my job and it has never been easy. i hope you will find a way to deal with it as well.

Re: REMEMBERED THOUGHTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ihop on Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 12:26:10 PM AEST
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Nice Poem, I cant tell you that I understand how you feel cause I dont. All I can tell you is to pray. Maybe instead of
"as i put my feelings upon the shelf"
"as i put my feelings on the top shelf"

Keep up the Good Work

Ian/ihop

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