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Clearly Speaking
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 03:32:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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" Clearly Speaking "
The many
quick racing thoughts
inside of my head
I want you to know that for you I really care
So many
unspoken things
I should have said
good friends like you are truly so rare
The many
surprising things
I never planned
including this special strong impact you have on me
So many
important things
I now understand
our blooming friendship will forever be
The many
confusing things
I'll never understand
I need you to know just how special you truly are
So many
forgotten things
helps us to grow
a friend like you will never be held nor kept afar
The many
undone things
I've never done
I need you with me always never to depart
So many
unspoken things
I've never said
Clearly Speaking
I will keep you always deep in my heart!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Cant Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-05-02 15:32:59]
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Re: Clearly Speaking
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 07:04:09 AM AEST
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A wonderful light hearted poem you have here, speaking with a soft whisper of deep love. So, wonderful job. I do have a slight criticism however, dividing each stanza especially short stanzas is a little hard for the reader. It takes us out of the moment feeling that there is a reason for division. stanzas are seperated in order to maintain flow, but in order to keep mood they are seperated by a horizontal blank margin. Placing something there takes so much away from what is a great piece. Hope to read more from you!
Good Job!
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Re: Clearly Speaking
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 08:45:34 AM AEST
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a very beautiful devotional friendship piece.. great expression and exquistely written
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Re: Clearly Speaking
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by Spike on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 10:37:06 PM AEST
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A little bit too close to Hallmark poetry for my liking (still, I've been there myself) but I cheer the sentiment, and anyone who gets lucky in love.
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