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Lay gently a kiss upon my up turned eyes
And speak to me of amber
That holds a hint of sadness, in her cries

One by one the keepers fading.
As Heather fair passes by
Mocking a dream that’s worth saving
Evermore she then I

Tapestries adorned in sunlight gold
In silks and satins there she lay
Listening to tears from young and old
As Heather fair finds her way…

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Heather Fair

Contributed by arden on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 04:18:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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copyright Arden2007

Lay gently a kiss upon my up turned eyes
And speak to me of amber
That holds a hint of sadness, in her cries

One by one the keepers fading.
As Heather fair passes by
Mocking a dream that’s worth saving
Evermore she then I

Tapestries adorned in sunlight gold
In silks and satins there she lay
Listening to tears from young and old
As Heather fair finds her way…

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Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 05:39:58 AM AEST
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Beautiful, I got really caught up in your words, you have woven some stunning images.
Beautifully sad, I enjoyed reading,

Dom

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 05:50:33 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. its very eloquently written. very old fashioned like.. i enjoyed this

vampyress jenni

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 12:35:11 PM AEST
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This is brautiful..
Blessings

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 03:04:28 PM AEST
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Wow Becky that is so beautiful.
I am always amaze just how good you are in writing.I say you can teach me a thing or two about writing. :)

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 06:35:20 AM AEST
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OH MY!!!
I am so pleased I ran across this!
I have always been wowed by your writing.
Amazing!

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:04:41 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful and done to perfection. I truly do admire your talent.

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 05:11:33 AM AEST
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Oh..friend..this is still looks very fresh. Photo also very beautiful..:-) venkat

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 03:09:34 PM AEST
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Goodness gracious! I am so glad that I
discovered this! What an AMAZING write
that reminds me of days and times gone by.
It is pure magic

Be well,
Loende

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 01:42:45 PM AEST
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truly beautiful,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 10:50:53 AM AEST
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Even though there is beauty in this there also seems to be a bit of melancholy.

Great writing.

Thanks,

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

Re: Heather Fair (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 20th May 2015 @ 08:28:47 PM AEST
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Just how I remember your writes being...Emotively strong, with great storytelling and attention to detail. Wonderful to see you back.
Hope you are still writing.

Mocking a dream that's worth saving.

Love it.

~Scorp

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