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Array ( [sid] => 134099 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Foreverr [time] => 2007-05-04 12:00:48 [hometext] => this ones horribly delightful ;] best one in a while i think [bodytext] => tear me right open
and rip out my heart
all ill do is smile
while your tearing me apart

your too in love to realize
things arent always as they appear
you say that i am perfect
ooh how wrong you are my dear

bad habits dont just come and go
they can be hard to break
like the habit of the blade to skin
its not something you can fake

but all the flaws just fade
when im all caught up in you
in silly conversations of:
what would you rather do?

its hurts so bad to leave you
or to think of short goodbyes
theres nothing good about them
so i guess the goods a lie

thats the only lie id tell you
and to that id still come clean
you say always and forever
and i believe thats what you mean

so when you rip me open
youll handle my heart with care
and still i will just smile
as i loose all my despair

and while im falling apart
only you keep me together
just another reason why
im believeing in forever [comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 2 [informant] => random_xoxo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Foreverr

Contributed by random_xoxo on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 12:00:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



tear me right open
and rip out my heart
all ill do is smile
while your tearing me apart

your too in love to realize
things arent always as they appear
you say that i am perfect
ooh how wrong you are my dear

bad habits dont just come and go
they can be hard to break
like the habit of the blade to skin
its not something you can fake

but all the flaws just fade
when im all caught up in you
in silly conversations of:
what would you rather do?

its hurts so bad to leave you
or to think of short goodbyes
theres nothing good about them
so i guess the goods a lie

thats the only lie id tell you
and to that id still come clean
you say always and forever
and i believe thats what you mean

so when you rip me open
youll handle my heart with care
and still i will just smile
as i loose all my despair

and while im falling apart
only you keep me together
just another reason why
im believeing in forever




Copyright © random_xoxo ... [ 2007-05-04 12:00:48]
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Re: Foreverr (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:20:40 AM AEST
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Great write very good keep up the work.




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