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Array ( [sid] => 134213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => depression [time] => 2007-05-08 16:46:50 [hometext] => EXACTLY HOW I FEEL [bodytext] => Tears running down my face
This depression is taking over me
Like a disease running through my veins
A shadow of sadness and anger follows me
There are bruises upon my wrist
Make-up covers my emotions
As I’m dying inside
Thoughts of suicide wont let me live
Won’t let me breathe
Starring through darkness at nothing
Anxiety wants to take control
I remind myself of the guilt I hold in my heart
The pain I keep within myself
The blood I've shed scars me to this day
I can’t shake this depression
It’s become apart of me
Apart of who I am today
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 13 [informant] => mali [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

depression

Contributed by mali on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 04:46:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tears running down my face
This depression is taking over me
Like a disease running through my veins
A shadow of sadness and anger follows me
There are bruises upon my wrist
Make-up covers my emotions
As I’m dying inside
Thoughts of suicide wont let me live
Won’t let me breathe
Starring through darkness at nothing
Anxiety wants to take control
I remind myself of the guilt I hold in my heart
The pain I keep within myself
The blood I've shed scars me to this day
I can’t shake this depression
It’s become apart of me
Apart of who I am today

Copyright Â© mali ... [ 2007-05-08 16:46:50]
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Re: depression (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 04:54:13 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written. Hang in there. Suicide is just a thought but you can reject those thoughts and live.
I know what depression is but now I take meds that works wonders in my life. It's called Zooloft.
Hang tuff, friend as joy cometh in the morning.
Huggs, luv, prayer,
emy

Re: depression (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:31:38 AM AEST
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I will mirror Ems thought and advice on this one.

Life has many hard and hurtful moments but there is always a shining light and a paved path to the happiness if you strive with all your might to travel it.

Michelle

Re: depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:49:08 AM AEST
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I too used to suffer from severe depression. Especially when I was a teenager. This poem is sad but it's wrote beautifully. Keep up the good work.

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