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[title] => Rape
[time] => 2007-05-08 23:10:34
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[bodytext] => The man on my street was convicted a rape suspect. He’s is always in his window but I show no disrespect. My comments almost slip out, then I have to recollect. Scars on his arm where he always injects. I wonder who the next female he will select. Slap her on her butt, showing extreme disrespect. He chooses the woman that themselves can’t protect. Scared out her pants she will not think to reject. He grabs her there and moans a name that’s incorrect. He smiles at her and says “You’re perfect.” She scratches him in the face and runs for the door. He screams in agony and yells, “You dirty whore.” She gets outside; she’s not a prisoner anymore. She stops; I scream “What are you stopping for?” He runs outside and slaps her to the floor. He grabs her by her legs and drags her to the door. Why didn’t she run when she had the chance before? This isn’t the end, there has to be more. He gets her upstairs and things get bad. He beats her like a man, and he is feeling glad. He throws her in the tub and makes her take a bath. She turns around in tears and cries “Please stop, DAD.”
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Rape
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ihop
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Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 11:10:34 PM in AEST
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The man on my street was convicted a rape suspect. He’s is always in his window but I show no disrespect. My comments almost slip out, then I have to recollect. Scars on his arm where he always injects. I wonder who the next female he will select. Slap her on her butt, showing extreme disrespect. He chooses the woman that themselves can’t protect. Scared out her pants she will not think to reject. He grabs her there and moans a name that’s incorrect. He smiles at her and says “You’re perfect.” She scratches him in the face and runs for the door. He screams in agony and yells, “You dirty whore.” She gets outside; she’s not a prisoner anymore. She stops; I scream “What are you stopping for?” He runs outside and slaps her to the floor. He grabs her by her legs and drags her to the door. Why didn’t she run when she had the chance before? This isn’t the end, there has to be more. He gets her upstairs and things get bad. He beats her like a man, and he is feeling glad. He throws her in the tub and makes her take a bath. She turns around in tears and cries “Please stop, DAD.”
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Re: Rape
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:27:31 AM AEST
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| this is a sad story and frome some one who supose to protect you.i hope you have move on and i will say a prayer for you. |
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Re: Rape
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by Randyjohnson on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:42:56 AM AEST
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| I also wrote a poem about rape but yours is better. I give this poem a 4 out of 5. |
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Re: Rape
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 11:55:08 AM AEST
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It is a sad poem indeed...
your expressions were appropriate to the subject.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Rape
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 11:39:02 PM AEST
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| So much of this exists that never gets spoken of. We need to tell the stories so others can protect themselves or feel safe when it is reported. A good piece. |
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Re: Rape
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 02:12:32 AM AEST
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A very essential peice of writting and well worth the reading. Excellant presentation
and well conveyed thoughts and discription.
Ben |
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