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" The Night Before "

She wakes up in the morning
reflecting on last night
feeling what he did to her
fills her mind with fright
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Her face and upper body bruised
with her clothes all torn
she has an empty feeling now
her life has been re-born
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She bleeds and hurts all over
on this bedroom floor
his place is hidden high above
the local corner store
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She sees some faded images
from The Night Before
he took her precious innocence
just like she was a whore
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The bruising on her chest and face
clearly show it all
they show the markings of the night
when she lost it all
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She keenly smells the scent of him
from her toes up to her head
cheap cologne and cigarettes
she is wishing she was dead
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Full of pain her body hurts
she slowly trys to stand
this poor young girl is so confused
she does not understand
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She collects her things and moves away
from his evil bed
the visions of him doing her
fills her hurting head
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She slowly moves up to the door
to finally leave the room
he walks inside the open door
she once again feels doomed
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He hits and slaps her all around
and then he throws her down
she re-lives all The Night Before
she can not scream a sound
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She cries in pain and hurts so bad
as she lives this horror
the visions that she sees again
are memories forever stored
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Thirty minutes of living hell
he leaves her once again
broken, dazed, and paralyzed
will this ever end?
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She bows and prays its over
she picks up all her things
covering her bruised body
she hears the church bells ring
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One more time she reaches
to open up the door
praying its all over
hoping to see him no more
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She clears the door to take off
she quickly runs away
finally free and running
to end this awful day
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Scarred for life that night and day
he took her innocence away
she lives with this forever now
each and every day!!!!!
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Penned By James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2004 James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2004 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

Copyright © 2004 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)

Copyright © 2004 HeartFelt TM
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Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion

Quote: The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart



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The Night Before

Contributed by MickeyPigKnuckles on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 02:20:05 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



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" The Night Before "

She wakes up in the morning
reflecting on last night
feeling what he did to her
fills her mind with fright
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
Her face and upper body bruised
with her clothes all torn
she has an empty feeling now
her life has been re-born
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She bleeds and hurts all over
on this bedroom floor
his place is hidden high above
the local corner store
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She sees some faded images
from The Night Before
he took her precious innocence
just like she was a whore
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
The bruising on her chest and face
clearly show it all
they show the markings of the night
when she lost it all
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She keenly smells the scent of him
from her toes up to her head
cheap cologne and cigarettes
she is wishing she was dead
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
Full of pain her body hurts
she slowly trys to stand
this poor young girl is so confused
she does not understand
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She collects her things and moves away
from his evil bed
the visions of him doing her
fills her hurting head
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She slowly moves up to the door
to finally leave the room
he walks inside the open door
she once again feels doomed
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
He hits and slaps her all around
and then he throws her down
she re-lives all The Night Before
she can not scream a sound
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She cries in pain and hurts so bad
as she lives this horror
the visions that she sees again
are memories forever stored
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
Thirty minutes of living hell
he leaves her once again
broken, dazed, and paralyzed
will this ever end?
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She bows and prays its over
she picks up all her things
covering her bruised body
she hears the church bells ring
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
One more time she reaches
to open up the door
praying its all over
hoping to see him no more
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
She clears the door to take off
she quickly runs away
finally free and running
to end this awful day
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
Scarred for life that night and day
he took her innocence away
she lives with this forever now
each and every day!!!!!
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us

Penned By James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2004 James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2004 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

Copyright © 2004 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)

Copyright © 2004 HeartFelt TM
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion

Quote: The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart







Copyright © MickeyPigKnuckles ... [ 2007-05-11 02:20:05]
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Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 03:15:54 AM AEST
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Chilling to read, it makes me shudder to think that people experience this.
You captured the horror and fear very well and the reader feels a great empathy with the girl even though we don't know anything else about her.
Skilful handling of an unpleasant topic,

Dom


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 09:11:05 AM AEST
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This is so tragically true and is a touching and frightening poem...very well done freind


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 02:33:50 PM AEST
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Heart wrenching but you did a great job with this.
Unfortunatly this happens more than we;d like to think.
huggs,
emy


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 10:18:56 PM AEST
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A painful read. I hope many read and comment and learn from it. I hope it makes people realise this does happen and maybe there is more we could do to prevent it?

Left shivers down my spine that's for sure...

Another piece of art from you

Dee xx


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 08:54:03 AM AEST
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it is so sad that this happens to people in reality. its very moving and you can picture it in your head.


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 08:54:04 AM AEST
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it is so sad that this happens to people in reality. its very moving and you can picture it in your head.


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by chickadeegirl on Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 04:51:11 PM AEST
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This made me cry when I read this.
Tears flowed down my cheeks. I feel every word as I read this. great write


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 09:35:43 PM AEST
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You had my heart pounding that he wouldn't be there again...well done..yet, well you know, I wish there wasn't such a thing as this in the world to write about....


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 02:35:59 AM AEST
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Very well written! Touching and heartfelt. Sad but true...Great description of hurt and fear… it draws the reader in. ~~Oceandreamer~~


Re: The Night Before (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 07:54:44 AM AEST
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Awesome write...frightening and very real. Made me feel sick! Easy reading and chilling!




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