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Where the hell are you loser? His failed attempts to over come, never dampen his hope that tomorrow will possibly finally be his day.

Where the hell are you loser? You miss him now he’s no longer here for you to make yourself better than, with demeaning remarks he always took with a smile.

Where the hell are you loser? Perhaps this will be a lesson in humility. Your ego always needing to be propped up, will no longer be at his expense!

So I return the question you’ve forever taken for granted……………..

Where the hell are you now………….Loser! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 6 [informant] => tradition [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Where the Hell are you, Loser?

Contributed by tradition on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 03:00:18 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Where the hell are you loser? They all cry out, his existence they have for too long taken for granted. His wounds never allowed to heal, they choose to ignore!

Where the hell are you loser? His failed attempts to over come, never dampen his hope that tomorrow will possibly finally be his day.

Where the hell are you loser? You miss him now he’s no longer here for you to make yourself better than, with demeaning remarks he always took with a smile.

Where the hell are you loser? Perhaps this will be a lesson in humility. Your ego always needing to be propped up, will no longer be at his expense!

So I return the question you’ve forever taken for granted……………..

Where the hell are you now………….Loser!

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Re: Where the Hell are you, Loser? (User Rating: 1 )
by GemmaLouiseRose on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 03:42:59 AM AEST
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this scares me :( but in a sad way. I feel like a loser 80% of the time.. but i chose to focus on the 20% i guess - good write xx

Re: Where the Hell are you, Loser? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 04:10:41 AM AEST
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wow a very expressive poem.. a great ventive write

vampyress Jenni

Re: Where the Hell are you, Loser? (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 06:15:25 AM AEST
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Good write. Getting Interesting reactions to a common question I bet .

Thanks fer sharing

Whisper

Re: Where the Hell are you, Loser? (User Rating: 1 )
by fayeelizibeth on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 09:37:53 PM AEST
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this is a nice reflection on the pain people can inflict without even knowing it. probally the people saying the repeating quote don't even realize how much thier words cut. sadness and anger. well written.

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