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Tear drops on fire
Burn through her soul
Tear drops on fire
Never leave her alone

Through the night she dreams
Of lonely nights she feels
And in her mind it comes
The sound of distant drums

They call out her name
And they seem not to whisper
They detail a memory of coming
But they seem not to come at all

What is it that they say
Can they release her in a way?
Can they fill her with a new life
To breathe in her lonely nights?
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Tear Drops

Contributed by scrivonel on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 11:54:14 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Tear drops on fire
Burn through her soul
Tear drops on fire
Never leave her alone

Through the night she dreams
Of lonely nights she feels
And in her mind it comes
The sound of distant drums

They call out her name
And they seem not to whisper
They detail a memory of coming
But they seem not to come at all

What is it that they say
Can they release her in a way?
Can they fill her with a new life
To breathe in her lonely nights?

Copyright © scrivonel ... [ 2007-05-17 23:54:14]
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Re: Tear Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 12:00:26 AM AEST
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Well written.. I like how you expressed thoughts and emotions in this poem.. great job..

Take care
Christina

Re: Tear Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 02:00:14 AM AEST
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I liked this poem. Each stanza left me with something amazing. The second stanza my fav....with "the sound of distant drums" . I could hear their rhythm. The ending stanza was nice with the questions. (I hope the answer is yes). Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura

Re: Tear Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 11:47:38 AM AEST
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Holy hell this is brilliant, i love it, like reading a story and i love your imagery and use of languge.. very well done freind...

Re: Tear Drops (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 03:16:23 PM AEST
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A wonderful write catching the lonely and questioning soul within each and every being.

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