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Spring rains wash away winter blues
Everything is coming to life
Blooming with multiple colors
throughout the green

Breathe deeply for the air is full and moist
Lungs inspire and expire
Rejoicing in the ability
of life and existence

2:00 am and the train whistle
blows out its' familiar tune
Miles away she rambles on
Sounds of life familiar

Darkness ensconces the farm
Shadows fall deeply around
All is hushed and quiet
Earth, sky and I... all woven into one

May 2007
Laura Horner
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Night Visions

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 04:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Spring rains wash away winter blues
Everything is coming to life
Blooming with multiple colors
throughout the green

Breathe deeply for the air is full and moist
Lungs inspire and expire
Rejoicing in the ability
of life and existence

2:00 am and the train whistle
blows out its' familiar tune
Miles away she rambles on
Sounds of life familiar

Darkness ensconces the farm
Shadows fall deeply around
All is hushed and quiet
Earth, sky and I... all woven into one

May 2007
Laura Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-05-18 16:12:57]
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Re: Night Visions (User Rating: 1 )
by scrivonel on Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 08:55:16 PM AEST
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Nice poem. I especially liked the second stanza.

scrivonel

Re: Night Visions (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 02:28:35 AM AEST
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Oh sis, I love how you write, not just of becoming one with
nature, but of being really and truly engulfed by it. This was such
a beautiful image. I was captured with your very first line ...

I know this sense of calmness and the brilliance of Mother
Earth when all is quiet. You have drawn the picture with an
exquisite array of colours. An absolutely flawless and
stunning display, hun.

always, many hugs to you

~MG

Re: Night Visions (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 08:10:22 AM AEST
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sis,

I felt such a tender breath of calm and freshness throughout this write. Calming and peaceful, I could smell the faint drops of rain and hear the trainswhistle. Lovely write

Hugs
~Michelle~

Re: Night Visions (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 11:45:20 AM AEST
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oooo! sooo beautiful! i adore that picture, and your poem, wow and wow,

hugs n' love nessa

roses

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