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I just want it to end
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 04:26:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The pain becomes too much
The darkness descends
No one to turn to
No one who really cares
Alone to face my demons
Tears flow down my face
The razor held securely
Conflicted emotions in play
I have done so much wrong
So much pain I will soon cause
Heaven may not want me
But even hell doesnt care
I could stay and be brave
Live to fight thru another day
Maybe things will improve
Maybe a smile will come
This is a game I have played
The outcome is always the same
There is no prize at the end
Only suffering along the way
I am tired of pretending
I am tired of these lies
I just want it to end
I just want to die
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2007-05-22 04:26:34]
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Re: I just want it to end
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 04:35:26 AM AEST
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Sad piece,but yet a very good write...
I surly hope tomorrow will bring you a better day where you will feel like a smile..
Blessings to you & your...
C.S |
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Re: I just want it to end
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by williamdye on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 01:14:52 PM AEST
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| I can relate, good job! |
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Re: I just want it to end
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:25:34 AM AEST
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Good write. I can relate. Some days are good and some are bad. (sometimes I feel like I'm constantly crawling through the mud) Everyday can be a fight to survive. You have voiced your feelings very well, here. Well done.
Peace, Laura |
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