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Explicit
Contributed by
aplsdka
on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 03:09:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Explicit.
So it says
On the music that
I hear every day
Explicit.
So they say
In the movies that
I see all the time
Explicit.
So they say
Of the books that
I read every day
Explicit.
So it says
Of swearwords that
I use every day
Explicit.
So it says
The vocab book
I do every week
Explicit:
It's all around
And yet there is no way
To say what I really want
No way to shout it out to
The unwatching world
So many ways to say
I'm *****
So many ways to say
That sucked
And yet I can't explain
The feelings that within
Are eating me away
An acid with no base
Can't form the water
With salt spray
Leaping from the rocks
As the torrential wind blows
A lullaby caucophony
Nothing but the edge in sight
And blue, calm blue
Rising edges rapid changes
Lapping licking fighting
Calm
I throw myself to the wind
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aplsdka
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Re: Explicit
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 03:14:02 PM AEST
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I liked the piece. I found it interesting how you change the rhythm to the write. I loved that ending stanza. Your last line I could see so well.....
(Calm
I throw myself to the wind). Nice ending.
Peace, Laura |
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