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Array ( [sid] => 134740 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => open up [time] => 2007-05-27 14:57:05 [hometext] => just bit of writing [bodytext] => as i sit here jaded and alone, i cry! you didn't realise at the time but you play with my emotions, make me cringe at the thought that i try so hard but all you do is push me away harder. How sad and pathetic i must seem! I constantly am finding myself standing at your door, begging to be accepted as one you could love, longing for your touch, your smile as you say those wicked little things you say, your scent as i snuggle up to you on a cold night, even just for your warmth as you hold me tight within you embrace! How i miss so!!!!! Yet all i can seem to say is yeah i do love you! Then you say no you don't, and i scream as my heart seems to be slowly crushed more and more! You.... even though you hate to hear it, are my everything! As i said to you "I will always love you forever and a day babe!" and i meant it with all my being! I know you push so hard because mainly of your past and the way that you can't stand to see anyone feel pain because of you. how you wish everyone to be happy, even if it means they find happiness without you. but guess what i tried! as hard as i could and still to no avail, i miss you so damn much! please dont push me away, i can't take it anymore, im too broken! if only my wishes would become true eh!
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open up

Contributed by jackson21 on Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 02:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



as i sit here jaded and alone, i cry! you didn't realise at the time but you play with my emotions, make me cringe at the thought that i try so hard but all you do is push me away harder. How sad and pathetic i must seem! I constantly am finding myself standing at your door, begging to be accepted as one you could love, longing for your touch, your smile as you say those wicked little things you say, your scent as i snuggle up to you on a cold night, even just for your warmth as you hold me tight within you embrace! How i miss so!!!!! Yet all i can seem to say is yeah i do love you! Then you say no you don't, and i scream as my heart seems to be slowly crushed more and more! You.... even though you hate to hear it, are my everything! As i said to you "I will always love you forever and a day babe!" and i meant it with all my being! I know you push so hard because mainly of your past and the way that you can't stand to see anyone feel pain because of you. how you wish everyone to be happy, even if it means they find happiness without you. but guess what i tried! as hard as i could and still to no avail, i miss you so damn much! please dont push me away, i can't take it anymore, im too broken! if only my wishes would become true eh!




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