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[aid] => mick
[title] => UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
[time] => 2007-05-30 11:53:46
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[bodytext] => tears that fall from widen eyes
they cant cry anymore
the heart is saddened
it has been torn from all
can it be mended
it can but through great feats
ones which cant be sought
through hoops and ladders....sighs
how can sighs help
they cant
broken hearts bleed
take and give
give and take
follow me though wondering light
and bring me a begging bright
show me a new path aside
with new things which bring great tide
show me...HOPE
you can do what one has asked
but will you do...the ungiven task
"LOVE" unconditional......
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[ratings] => 6
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)
UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
Contributed by
brew
on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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tears that fall from widen eyes
they cant cry anymore
the heart is saddened
it has been torn from all
can it be mended
it can but through great feats
ones which cant be sought
through hoops and ladders....sighs
how can sighs help
they cant
broken hearts bleed
take and give
give and take
follow me though wondering light
and bring me a begging bright
show me a new path aside
with new things which bring great tide
show me...HOPE
you can do what one has asked
but will you do...the ungiven task
"LOVE" unconditional......
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 12:22:23 PM AEST
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CAN TEAR DROPS EVER STOP FALLING LIKE RAIN , YES EVEN THE DARKEST OF CLOUDS HAVE TO DRY EVENTIALLY ,THE NEW PATH IS YOURS TO CHOOSE ,HOPE YOU NEED TO FIND IN THE THOUGHTS YOU THINK ,LOVE IS THERE FOR YOUR TAKING ,JUST KNOW WHERE TO FIND IT TO TAKE UNCONDITIONALLY
LOVE YOU BABE
SCOTT |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 12:35:04 PM AEST
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wow this is such an exquiste emotional piece! It hits one right in the heart.. a deep feeling poem here great job
vampyress Jenni |
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 03:24:09 AM AEST
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Damn, this made me cry....so many feelings come to light here. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 01:34:00 PM AEST
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Nice dana a dark work quite enchanting in a macarbre way and always versatile well done
kiddo . . .
Ben |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by Oceandreamer on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 10:17:12 PM AEST
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| Great write Brew!Emotional and deep,Dark yet hopefuI .I relate well to emotional poetry .Really have enjoyed reading this poem!Thanks for sharing.Thanks also for the lovely comment on my poem. ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 12:44:07 AM AEST
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| So heartwrenching, so emotional, yet I like the way you also know what you want....what you need! |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:56:05 AM AEST
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I have always sought that unconditional love it is like an emotion that has been intombed for all time, to be kept from mankind.
One will know I am sure when they find it...but heck it takes forever...I'm still waiting for that unconditional love. My hope will never give up on that one.
FANTASTIC WRITE. My unconditional love to you....dear heart. |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:16:53 AM AEST
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a poem that touches the hearts of all readers, and that wish of every soul..
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 10:46:21 PM AEST
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| Awesome write! I can relate to it. It pulls the strings of the heart... It shows the many sides to love…the intensity, heartache, magic ….unconditionally. Love gives all … it comes from the heart. I like the way you rapped it up. ~~ Oceandreamer ~~ |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 10:12:07 AM AEST
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My sweet friend, Dayna .. what can I say about an emotional
write like this? There are no words to truly describe what you
have made me feel, hun. But if I could be so bold, this line ...
"show me...HOPE"
wow. That spoke VOLUMES to me this night. Hope. It is such
a sad, lonely word. But there is someone out there who could
take that word, wrap it in tenderness and give it as a gift so
that no one would ever feel unloved again.
Beautiful write, my friend. Missed you ...
*hugs you tight*
~Breezy |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 01:00:13 PM AEST
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Quite a masterful excercise in the modern form of poetry. An exquisite contemporary piece worthy of deep praise. I loved the flow, the style, and as a poet not typically a fan of such a style I found this to be far and away more brilliant than that which is simply above par in the form.
Wonderful Job!
SCM |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 12:06:46 PM AEST
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wow what a heart wrenching write.
amazing job on this
take care |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 03:35:55 AM AEST
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sweet poem..
your creativity and expression to the reader shone through.
nice work here |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by GraveTypeBed on
Thursday, 21st February 2008 @ 05:18:50 PM AEST
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This is way more than just words...
Brilliant |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL HOPE
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:34:09 PM AEST
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So beautiful. so perfect. If only what we give can be returned... someday... a hope... a wish... a dream
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond |
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