Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-June 21:03:13 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 134830 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Because you Asked [time] => 2007-05-31 09:30:57 [hometext] => I'm not too fond of this one, but whatever. Some have told me it could have multiple meanings... What do you think? [bodytext] => I'm sick
I'm sick
Can't you see
I'm sick?
Have I been myself lately?
Do I seem
lethargic?
Why would I leave my friends
And wonder alone?
I'm sick
I'm sick
It's plain to see
I'm sick
Why do you think I keep writing
those two letters, fool?
I just want to curl up
and cry my heart out
Why does that suprise you,
my best friend?
You didn't think I could
feel this way?
You think I'm always cheery?
I'm sick
I'm sick
Can't you see
I'm sick?
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Dimes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Because you Asked

Contributed by Dimes on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 09:30:57 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I'm sick
I'm sick
Can't you see
I'm sick?
Have I been myself lately?
Do I seem
lethargic?
Why would I leave my friends
And wonder alone?
I'm sick
I'm sick
It's plain to see
I'm sick
Why do you think I keep writing
those two letters, fool?
I just want to curl up
and cry my heart out
Why does that suprise you,
my best friend?
You didn't think I could
feel this way?
You think I'm always cheery?
I'm sick
I'm sick
Can't you see
I'm sick?

Copyright © Dimes ... [ 2007-05-31 09:30:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Because you Asked (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 11:57:07 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Ok totally differ, yet are you really sick.or just sick of certain things?> We can get that way..I know I can. Liked it....lil open and kinda staggered, yet...Hey I am an un-bias opinion who writes out there..alot.

Brew~

Re: Because you Asked (User Rating: 1 )
by Asthenia on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 03:35:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Seems like you're writing about depression to me; this was a pretty good poem. It's open, raw, and honest...it just puts everything out there and that's how it should be...good job

Re: Because you Asked (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 05:46:27 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

good poem. to me it speaks of depression or simply someone who's tired of everything and needs a break from it all. either way i've been there.
keep writing!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com