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i can't believe your real,

like you and i were born in love

how beautiful we

feel.

Amidst

the darkness of the night

when all the world''s

asleep,

in

my heart you fit so right

'tis there your love i

keep.

Here we are

just you and i close enough to kiss,

the moon is dreaming in the sky

while shaddows

reminisce.

Perhaps he''s dreaming

of her love

that would explain his glow,

for if she's anything like you

how he must love her

so.

Yes

here we are

just me and you caught up

in love's sweet

bliss,

upon a star where dreams come true

while shaddow

reminisce.

Ben

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While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 07:03:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I look at you and still sometime's

i can't believe your real,

like you and i were born in love

how beautiful we

feel.

Amidst

the darkness of the night

when all the world''s

asleep,

in

my heart you fit so right

'tis there your love i

keep.

Here we are

just you and i close enough to kiss,

the moon is dreaming in the sky

while shaddows

reminisce.

Perhaps he''s dreaming

of her love

that would explain his glow,

for if she's anything like you

how he must love her

so.

Yes

here we are

just me and you caught up

in love's sweet

bliss,

upon a star where dreams come true

while shaddow

reminisce.

Ben

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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 08:27:18 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write..It flows so nice...Another excellent ...

Blessing to you & your...
C.S

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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Another excellent proclamation of love flows from our cupid poet.Well done Ben.

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 03:33:50 PM AEST
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You two got it going on.
Awesome work.
big huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by CuttersAngel on Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 05:21:19 PM AEST
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i really enjoy reading your work. i love the way you rhyme. i give you alot of respect. keep up on your awsome writings.

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 01:14:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful Ben, you two are some lucky folks....I wish you the best always.
Peace and hugs,
Your hippie sis

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 02:11:32 AM AEST
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Ben,

each one of your writes radiate such love and romance, may that love always sing within your hearts and souls.

Michelle

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:24:30 PM AEST
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so beautiful!

love n' hugs nessa

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 05:13:00 PM AEST
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I really like the idea of "while shadows reminisce".
So romantic and wih wonderful rhythm (as always!)

Lovely,
Dom

Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:59:56 PM AEST
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"the moon is dreaming in the sky

while shaddows

reminisce."~you

Incredibly lyrical...I could do some gorgeous writing w/ this verse as a starting point, hmm...

BigLoveMuchPeace
~me

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