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Array ( [sid] => 134974 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a twist of an outcome [time] => 2007-06-06 07:55:49 [hometext] => another idea i have got hehe!! this has alot of ups and downs in it.. enjoy [bodytext] => Laying naked on the bedroom floor
stripped down to the core
what is beneath the bone?

Looking inside I found all the secrets
you dare to hide

Don't fight the feeling
you know it's there
you hear the faint melody in your ears

Presenting the bare soul
..wide open..
I take all control
coming inside... all through... within

Your Angel I am
protecting you from bad things
to ever rise again....

Take my hand
I'll lead you home... home inside of me

Vampyress Jenni [comments] => 6 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Phantomvampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
a twist of an outcome

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 07:55:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Laying naked on the bedroom floor
stripped down to the core
what is beneath the bone?

Looking inside I found all the secrets
you dare to hide

Don't fight the feeling
you know it's there
you hear the faint melody in your ears

Presenting the bare soul
..wide open..
I take all control
coming inside... all through... within

Your Angel I am
protecting you from bad things
to ever rise again....

Take my hand
I'll lead you home... home inside of me

Vampyress Jenni




Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-06-06 07:55:49]
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Re: a twist of an outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:43:13 PM AEST
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wow Jen,

up and down and super! I sure love your ideas hun beautiful write

Michelle


Re: a twist of an outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:39:55 PM AEST
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Lovely flow and narration, deeply sensitvie and an air of warmth and compassion. a most lovely peice of writting in your usual jenni manner.


Ben


Re: a twist of an outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 01:34:21 AM AEST
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This was amazing. The ups and downs were brillantly written. Full of emotions.. Well done.

Take care
Christina


Re: a twist of an outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 02:49:18 AM AEST
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Your Angel I am
protecting you from bad things
to ever rise again....

Especially liked this line.....


Re: a twist of an outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:14:43 AM AEST
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Jenni, such a beautiful expression of love and loyalty.
There is a strong, yet soft conviction in your words.

Completely beautiful ~

~Breezy


Re: a twist of an outcome (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:36:08 AM AEST
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Lovley write! Devoted love from a place deep inside.Well expressed. ~~Oceandreamer~~




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