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When I can’t sleep
Chest feels tight
I can hear every beat

Loneliness echoes
Inside my whole being
Tossing & turning
It’s you that I’m seeing

I miss you so much
I can’t stand the pain
You made me whole
Now I’m lost again

Hearts once entwined
With love everlasting
Thoughts all unwind
Through my mind ever blasting

I want you, I need you
I love you so much
I long for that day again
When I can feel your touch

Daylight comes
In the blink of an eye
Feel so helpless
I just want to cry

How did I fail
What did I do
Tell me you’re wrong
That you miss me too

I know I’m not perfect
But I’d never lie, cheat or steal
I care deeply for you
My heart only you can heal

So love me and hold me
And tell me your mine
From now on
‘Til the end of all time
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Loneliness Echoes

Contributed by airhead on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 09:04:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

In the dead of night
When I can’t sleep
Chest feels tight
I can hear every beat

Loneliness echoes
Inside my whole being
Tossing & turning
It’s you that I’m seeing

I miss you so much
I can’t stand the pain
You made me whole
Now I’m lost again

Hearts once entwined
With love everlasting
Thoughts all unwind
Through my mind ever blasting

I want you, I need you
I love you so much
I long for that day again
When I can feel your touch

Daylight comes
In the blink of an eye
Feel so helpless
I just want to cry

How did I fail
What did I do
Tell me you’re wrong
That you miss me too

I know I’m not perfect
But I’d never lie, cheat or steal
I care deeply for you
My heart only you can heal

So love me and hold me
And tell me your mine
From now on
‘Til the end of all time

Copyright Â© airhead ... [ 2007-06-07 21:04:42]
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Re: Loneliness Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by Tot on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 10:31:19 PM AEST
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A beautiful write! You rhymed so wonderfully~ something I always try to do but never seem to get it just right..~Tot

Re: Loneliness Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:44:32 AM AEST
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This was beautofully written. I could feel the need that you have for this person and the love that you wish you could give. This was well expressed and I can relate to your words and thoughts in a way. Well done.

Take care
Christina

Re: Loneliness Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 07:04:45 AM AEST
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Lovely write.This poem has a nice bite to it... It has a way of gripping,dropping,tossing and turning the reader... Great rhythm and alive with emotion! ~~Oceandreamer~~

Re: Loneliness Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 11:42:56 AM AEST
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Wow, i think its the rhymin which makes this a very pretty poem! and its so damn true...excellent read! - madhusudan

Re: Loneliness Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by DeeMeister on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:54:23 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this poem, thankyou for writing such a beautifully written and sad poem.

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