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Array ( [sid] => 135097 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Standing On The Hill [time] => 2007-06-10 04:08:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Did you see me standing
On that hill afar..

Looking seeking wanting
Riches of my life to shine

Standing looking far above
The heavens..

As the doors of heaven rain
Down his blessing on me

As a mystery unfold to where

The bluest of the blue,

Stand looking back at me from
Afar..

As I cry out across the way and
My echo ring,

Near and far..

Hoping you captured just a glance
Of me standing on that old hill
Afar..

While the heavens open up and
Shower me with abundance of
His blessings..
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Standing On The Hill

Contributed by honey56 on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 04:08:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Did you see me standing
On that hill afar..

Looking seeking wanting
Riches of my life to shine

Standing looking far above
The heavens..

As the doors of heaven rain
Down his blessing on me

As a mystery unfold to where

The bluest of the blue,

Stand looking back at me from
Afar..

As I cry out across the way and
My echo ring,

Near and far..

Hoping you captured just a glance
Of me standing on that old hill
Afar..

While the heavens open up and
Shower me with abundance of
His blessings..

Copyright © honey56 ... [ 2007-06-10 04:08:18]
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Re: Standing On The Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 06:39:47 AM AEST
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Honey that would be a beautiful picture, very good open write. I really like reading your work. Vincent

Re: Standing On The Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by Kandice-n-Justin on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 10:37:19 AM AEST
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i like it. very beautiful!

Re: Standing On The Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 02:43:45 AM AEST
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Yes Honey56, I could see you standing on the hill; it is very vivid indeed; thank you for sharing this beautiful and insprirational picture poem you have drawn in words.

RaquelLeah:D

Re: Standing On The Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 02:50:41 AM AEST
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Wow....now this is a beautiful write ! Emotional with a touch of mystery. I like it!Thanks for sharing... ~~Oceandreamer~~

Re: Standing On The Hill (User Rating: 1 )
by sojourner on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 11:44:38 AM AEST
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very good poem,from this write,I see someone with a longing for something just beyond their grasp,this coul be the story of my life.
Sojourner,

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