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Array ( [sid] => 135165 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When You Read My Words [time] => 2007-06-12 10:08:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Allow me to capture your mind,
Luring it into an open dimension,
Holding it delicately in my hands,
My ink wondering over it's surface,
Allow my words to penetrate its soft tissue,
Soaking into you lobes,
Words presenting an image,
A picture of waves of thoughts,
Merging vigorously to create an idea,
Allow this idea to swirl uncontrollably,
Encompassing your every dream,
Your every aspiration,
As it funnels upwards let your fantasies be carried by it,
Expanding across horizons and new frontiers,
Watch as your thoughts mingle with my own,
Our dreams, ideas, fantasies and visions become one,
Allow me to take the velvet reigns,
Controlling the stallions which are our ambitions,
Our passionate cravings,
Steering you into my world as you take this ride,
Then gently I release the scarlet restraints,
Allowing the beasts we tamed to barrel downwards,
Explosively crashing into your open mind,
Permanently leaving a poetic impression. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shnyzz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
When You Read My Words

Contributed by shnyzz on Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 10:08:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Allow me to capture your mind,
Luring it into an open dimension,
Holding it delicately in my hands,
My ink wondering over it's surface,
Allow my words to penetrate its soft tissue,
Soaking into you lobes,
Words presenting an image,
A picture of waves of thoughts,
Merging vigorously to create an idea,
Allow this idea to swirl uncontrollably,
Encompassing your every dream,
Your every aspiration,
As it funnels upwards let your fantasies be carried by it,
Expanding across horizons and new frontiers,
Watch as your thoughts mingle with my own,
Our dreams, ideas, fantasies and visions become one,
Allow me to take the velvet reigns,
Controlling the stallions which are our ambitions,
Our passionate cravings,
Steering you into my world as you take this ride,
Then gently I release the scarlet restraints,
Allowing the beasts we tamed to barrel downwards,
Explosively crashing into your open mind,
Permanently leaving a poetic impression.




Copyright © shnyzz ... [ 2007-06-12 10:08:41]
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Re: When You Read My Words (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 01:25:15 PM AEST
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Wow, this is both beautiful and impressive. The diction used to represent the journey of writing is incredible, the reader becomes involved in exactly everything you say. Amazing job, your a very talented writer.


Re: When You Read My Words (User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 03:56:53 PM AEST
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Amazing....It captures you and holds you in it's spell. Brilliant simply brilliant!


Re: When You Read My Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 04:47:33 PM AEST
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and then...... Gee Great write that caught this readers attention then puff I was left to mine own interpretation
Nice write

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