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Array ( [sid] => 13545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Edens Mist [time] => 2003-03-01 02:00:00 [hometext] => Perhaps in paradise depths
Edens memories remain
Where once man lived alone
Quietly suffering pain

But God loved Adam
Loved him indeed
And so the story begins
In the mists of Eden decreed

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [bodytext] => Edens Mist

Adam slowly awakening
In morning mists of Edens light
Stretching and yawning sleepily
He recalls a dream last night

Walking with God in paradise
Surveying Gods creation all around
Adam remarked how perfect it was
Only one discrepancy had he found

“ Every type of living creature “
“ In your blessed garden I can see “
“ To every creature you formed a mate “
“ Every creature that is , but me “

“ I sit and watch in wistful joy “
“ As birds fly wing to wing “
“ And listen in total awe “
“ As songs of love they sing “

“ I see in every creature“
“ Whether on land or waters deep “
“ The need to have a mate “
“ A special love to keep “

~~~~God Answers~~~~

“ When you awake “
“ In Edens mists you’ll see “
“ A creation just for you“
“ A loving gift from me “

“ Give her your respect “
“ Share with her your life “
“ You are now complete "
“ Here is Eve your wife “

Russ
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Edens Mist

Contributed by Lone_er on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Edens Mist

Adam slowly awakening
In morning mists of Edens light
Stretching and yawning sleepily
He recalls a dream last night

Walking with God in paradise
Surveying Gods creation all around
Adam remarked how perfect it was
Only one discrepancy had he found

“ Every type of living creature “
“ In your blessed garden I can see “
“ To every creature you formed a mate “
“ Every creature that is , but me “

“ I sit and watch in wistful joy “
“ As birds fly wing to wing “
“ And listen in total awe “
“ As songs of love they sing “

“ I see in every creature“
“ Whether on land or waters deep “
“ The need to have a mate “
“ A special love to keep “

~~~~God Answers~~~~

“ When you awake “
“ In Edens mists you’ll see “
“ A creation just for you“
“ A loving gift from me “

“ Give her your respect “
“ Share with her your life “
“ You are now complete "
“ Here is Eve your wife “

Russ

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Re: Edens Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:01:16 AM AEST
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I always love the comments before your poems - it's a unique way to lead into what you want to say :)) This poem has such a dreamlike flow to it and I like its message. ... Jan

Re: Edens Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 04:10:14 AM AEST
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beautiful it probably was that way can't imagine anyother good write
Sharon

Re: Edens Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 06:19:29 AM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me, Russ.... both with your poem..and your notes.... It was a pleasure meeting you the other night.
Jenni

Re: Edens Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:49:03 AM AEST
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Russ I will say one of my favs! This was so well done I truly enjoyed reading this! Makes us wonder! Great peice! Christina

Re: Edens Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:14:15 PM AEST
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And God made Eve....
to make the Garden perfect!!!!! :-)
Nice write!!! {{{{russ}}}}
Angel always.....
Godspeed........ 0:-)

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