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Array ( [sid] => 135533 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Love Song [time] => 2007-06-25 18:32:58 [hometext] => By: Todd Davidson, toddmdavidson.com [bodytext] => The window to your heart
is just a picture show
the curtain has fallen
not so long ago

When we first began
your love seemed so true
these days you are bitter
known only to a few

You make me sad
when you want me to bleed
yes this you should know
this I do see

It is never enough
all that I do
you only see faults
and show everyone too

You are not the first
to take this path
I can clearely see
the comming wrath

You just sit there
your silence is heard
I feel your secrets
no need for words

I am not found
in your chambers inside
I wish you love
so I'll kiss you goodbye
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 71 [informant] => Todd [notes] => Edited per request in Poem Edit and Deletion Requests Moderator_18 July 29, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

My Love Song

Contributed by Todd on Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 06:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

The window to your heart
is just a picture show
the curtain has fallen
not so long ago

When we first began
your love seemed so true
these days you are bitter
known only to a few

You make me sad
when you want me to bleed
yes this you should know
this I do see

It is never enough
all that I do
you only see faults
and show everyone too

You are not the first
to take this path
I can clearely see
the comming wrath

You just sit there
your silence is heard
I feel your secrets
no need for words

I am not found
in your chambers inside
I wish you love
so I'll kiss you goodbye

Copyright © Todd ... [ 2007-06-25 18:32:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 07:04:14 PM AEST
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Todd,
a poetic write of pain and love, flowing and beautiful but so damn sad. I hope your days are filled with happiness.......

Michelle

Re: My Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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I agree with Michelle and I wish you good luck in your future.

Re: My Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 07:55:25 PM AEST
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I agree with Michelle and I wish you good luck in your future.

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