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Array ( [sid] => 135551 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Stay [time] => 2007-06-26 06:59:31 [hometext] => "My heart''s missing something / Something it knows its missing / When I''m around you it goes away..." [bodytext] => A hole is in my soul
From where it came
Or why it's there is
Unknown.
I wish I could fix it,
Won't somebody fix it?
My hearts missing something,
Something it knows it's missing.
When I'm around you it goes away,
Happiness resides and I can go play
But once you're gone
The happiness fades,
The feelings of loneliness
Come back to stay.
Please stay. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 43 [informant] => aloneinthememory [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Please Stay

Contributed by aloneinthememory on Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 06:59:31 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A hole is in my soul
From where it came
Or why it's there is
Unknown.
I wish I could fix it,
Won't somebody fix it?
My hearts missing something,
Something it knows it's missing.
When I'm around you it goes away,
Happiness resides and I can go play
But once you're gone
The happiness fades,
The feelings of loneliness
Come back to stay.
Please stay.

Copyright © aloneinthememory ... [ 2007-06-26 06:59:31]
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Re: Please Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 09:51:45 AM AEST
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this is a very expressive powerful write.. i like the flow of it also.. great job

Vampyress Jenni

Re: Please Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by visionarybee on Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 11:36:50 AM AEST
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Hi PhantomV

I believe you made comments on my poems.
thanks

this poem is very beautiful

it's hard to be in love with someone
especially if they are only around
sometimes

it makes a person feel empty
and hallow inside

I've felt this way allot in the past.

I believe it's possible to grow
out of this
except for one thing

I think only 1 entity can make a person
feel whole and feel the emptiness inside
them

and that is our 3'n'1 God
our Heavenly father, his son our Lord
& Savior Jesus Christ and the Holy
Spirit

but to me this is a very complex thing
as I still seek Jesus the Christ
I feel unworthy.

I sometimes think it has to
be a supernatural experience.

well I still try to learn about Jesus
and strive to be counted worthy
and endeavor to be Christian

also not sure if I've been baptized
with the Holy Spirit
as our Lord Jesus spoke about
in the gospels of the Holy Bible

no person can feel that emptiness in
your heart
in your sole

I have a boyfriend who loves me
very much and is here very much
yet I'm still unfulfilled, I'm still
unhappy.

I think because I'm still
not right with God.

I still feel kind of empty.
I feel depressed much of the time.

A doctor once told me when I was much younger
that you can depend on anybody for your happiness and he was write.

Please don't depend on this
man for your happiness
you will only be disappointed.

look to your children if you have them
look to other people, your friends
and your community
and especially

seek God

Re: Please Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Rockalife66 on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:02:28 PM AEST
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I like this one. I can't help but to feel the same about someone I know. Now that I see this poem, I know exactly how I was feeling. I couldn't it out all right. But yes this one is very good thank you for your help.

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