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Wishing is what I do,
My life seems to be wasting,
For love is what I miss...
Days go by and still it seems,
My love I would never see.

Could there be such a thing,
As a person out there just for me?
Searching for that one that could be me?
No is what I use to think,
Finding such a thing is just a dream.
A fairytale if you will,
A dream and nothing else.
To my surprise I have found someone,
Searching just like me,

Kind and sweet is her heart,
Warm and soft with her touch,
Voice so soothing,
She seems too much,
Do I dare to believe?
That such a person is just for me?
My head starts to spin, my heart is a race,
I can’t speak nor even think straight.

So when my lips start to quake...
I look into her eyes...
I’ll take the risk...
For she is what I miss.

Hopeless is what I was,
Wishing is what I did,
My life is not a waste,
For her love...
I hope to take.
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Hopelessly

Contributed by johnny2105 on Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 12:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Hopeless is what I am,
Wishing is what I do,
My life seems to be wasting,
For love is what I miss...
Days go by and still it seems,
My love I would never see.

Could there be such a thing,
As a person out there just for me?
Searching for that one that could be me?
No is what I use to think,
Finding such a thing is just a dream.
A fairytale if you will,
A dream and nothing else.
To my surprise I have found someone,
Searching just like me,

Kind and sweet is her heart,
Warm and soft with her touch,
Voice so soothing,
She seems too much,
Do I dare to believe?
That such a person is just for me?
My head starts to spin, my heart is a race,
I can’t speak nor even think straight.

So when my lips start to quake...
I look into her eyes...
I’ll take the risk...
For she is what I miss.

Hopeless is what I was,
Wishing is what I did,
My life is not a waste,
For her love...
I hope to take.




Copyright © johnny2105 ... [ 2007-06-26 12:10:10]
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Re: Hopelessly (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 12:44:26 PM AEST
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If its there..TAKE IT...
Take and make a beautiful thing, yet; Do not take what she has or will have for you..for granted... People choose to see over ones' heart alot. They feel they are over baring and powering....but its a 50-50...So when you seek her, and she seeks you...do it equally.....I know.I am one who falls into an open, yet fearful arm...I guess being a female, makes me...who I am. Deep write, with truthful heart....follow it now, and be safe...watch all steps......Hope it works

Brew~


Re: Hopelessly (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 03:01:49 AM AEST
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wow a very powerful expressive emotional write.. you can feel the emotions flowing through this poem.. awesome job

vampyress Jenni


Re: Hopelessly (User Rating: 1 )
by BigDre on Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 02:35:42 AM AEST
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Very Well written. I can feel the pain of your search for love. As well as, the gratification in finding someone who is on the same journey as you. I like at the end you the tone goes from one of passive by searching for love to aggressive to the end where you will take her love.




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