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Array ( [sid] => 135611 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In The End [time] => 2007-06-28 11:16:57 [hometext] => This is my first poem. So, I didn't really know how to form it. Oh well, I hope everyone likes it. :) [bodytext] => ~My first poem~
~In The End~

I think about you everyday and night,
I feel the pain in your heart after ever single fight.
I'll hold my teddy bear tonight, dreaming of you,
wishing you were here to get me through,
this dark and lonely room.
It seems like the walls are closing in
and there is nowhere to go.
It's true, I really do need you.

You're like the spark in someone's heart,
that is so hard to control,
it's like happiness takes over their soul.
After they get it,
they don't want let it go.
You're the fire inside me,
that gives me oxygen to breathe.
That stops me from bleeding.
Your something I just can't live without.

I just want you to know that, to me,
your so lovable, sweet, and kind.
Everything about you relaxes me,
which is hard to find.
Every time I see you, I can't help but to smile,
I can't take it when you say you'll be gone for awhile.
That's why it would be so hard to say good bye,
put a ***** bullet into my head, rip my heart out,
I'd rather die.
Without you I'd be nothing,
like a puzzle with a piece missing,
or a story without an ending.
It wouldn't be right,
I need you.

Just remember,
I'll stand by you,
to get you through,
that dark and lonely room,
that seems to follow us every night.
But baby, don't be scared and cry,
if we save each other,
we won't die.

All those fights we had,
they don't matter anymore.
This is right here right now.
In the end what really matters,
is that we'll always be madly in-love with each other.

KayKay- a.k.a- R O C K S T A R
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In The End

Contributed by Rockalife66 on Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 11:16:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

~My first poem~
~In The End~

I think about you everyday and night,
I feel the pain in your heart after ever single fight.
I'll hold my teddy bear tonight, dreaming of you,
wishing you were here to get me through,
this dark and lonely room.
It seems like the walls are closing in
and there is nowhere to go.
It's true, I really do need you.

You're like the spark in someone's heart,
that is so hard to control,
it's like happiness takes over their soul.
After they get it,
they don't want let it go.
You're the fire inside me,
that gives me oxygen to breathe.
That stops me from bleeding.
Your something I just can't live without.

I just want you to know that, to me,
your so lovable, sweet, and kind.
Everything about you relaxes me,
which is hard to find.
Every time I see you, I can't help but to smile,
I can't take it when you say you'll be gone for awhile.
That's why it would be so hard to say good bye,
put a ***** bullet into my head, rip my heart out,
I'd rather die.
Without you I'd be nothing,
like a puzzle with a piece missing,
or a story without an ending.
It wouldn't be right,
I need you.

Just remember,
I'll stand by you,
to get you through,
that dark and lonely room,
that seems to follow us every night.
But baby, don't be scared and cry,
if we save each other,
we won't die.

All those fights we had,
they don't matter anymore.
This is right here right now.
In the end what really matters,
is that we'll always be madly in-love with each other.

KayKay- a.k.a- R O C K S T A R

Copyright © Rockalife66 ... [ 2007-06-28 11:16:57]
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Re: In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 12:24:46 PM AEST
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i totally know exactly how u feel, i love this poem and if its ur first, kudos and keep it going! u did a great job!

Jenni xxoo

Re: In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 01:30:02 PM AEST
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Well for a first it came out well..
The style of it I like, comes across as you are talking directly to this other person.

The ending is solid and the true sense of love through it all you stay together I like that.

Michelle

Re: In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by aloneinthememory on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 03:22:01 PM AEST
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I like this alot. It's very full of emotion, which is why I like it so much:) Emotional poetry usually comes out better because it means something. Fantastic poem, especially since it's your first. keep writing:)

Fox

Re: In The End (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 05:09:45 PM AEST
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very sweet and heartfelt, it's great to see this much emotion in a poem, hope everything works out for you guys :)

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