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Array ( [sid] => 135664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Momas boy [time] => 2007-07-01 23:55:20 [hometext] => seeping into the sand [bodytext] => A male child is born innocent helpless
A man child
A mother holds with tender kisses
A boy born to be hyper and wild

Wa wa a baby cries
A man child
A baby bottle and diaper dry
Dada first talking tries

Momma a later supprize
Delight with a boy this size
Worms bugs and butter flies
Toughtness comes by many a cry

Bang bang a cowboy lies
Wounded by and by
A shoulder wound never to die
Momma's boy

Daddy works,but Momma's there
A scraped knee for Mom to repair
With tender care
Years pass with wonder where

High school done
A war to be won
Terrorism is not a man
Three thousand as towers cave in

God accepts three thousand souls
Time takes another three thousand or so
Mama's boy joins with Sally John and Joe
G I's Goverment issue

Wars and rummers go on and on
Dark clouds don't always bring rain
Blown sand covers the sun
Humvee's bake in a desert oven

Down a sandy road
Moma's boy Sally and John and Joe
Eyes watching to and fro
O'mygod a flash of red

Fire and blood on desert sand
A far away land
Suddenly dead Sally Joe and John
Momma's boy lies in hot sand

Daddy's proud of good son
Momma's boy life seeping into the sand
Never understanding this desert land
Momma momma cries a dieing son


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Momas boy

Contributed by sinned on Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 11:55:20 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



A male child is born innocent helpless
A man child
A mother holds with tender kisses
A boy born to be hyper and wild

Wa wa a baby cries
A man child
A baby bottle and diaper dry
Dada first talking tries

Momma a later supprize
Delight with a boy this size
Worms bugs and butter flies
Toughtness comes by many a cry

Bang bang a cowboy lies
Wounded by and by
A shoulder wound never to die
Momma's boy

Daddy works,but Momma's there
A scraped knee for Mom to repair
With tender care
Years pass with wonder where

High school done
A war to be won
Terrorism is not a man
Three thousand as towers cave in

God accepts three thousand souls
Time takes another three thousand or so
Mama's boy joins with Sally John and Joe
G I's Goverment issue

Wars and rummers go on and on
Dark clouds don't always bring rain
Blown sand covers the sun
Humvee's bake in a desert oven

Down a sandy road
Moma's boy Sally and John and Joe
Eyes watching to and fro
O'mygod a flash of red

Fire and blood on desert sand
A far away land
Suddenly dead Sally Joe and John
Momma's boy lies in hot sand

Daddy's proud of good son
Momma's boy life seeping into the sand
Never understanding this desert land
Momma momma cries a dieing son


Sinned











































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Re: Momas boy (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 03:50:17 AM AEST
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A very powerful and touching piece. Good impact with your final stanza..thank you.


Re: Momas boy (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 05:46:33 AM AEST
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a very intense powerful write.. the ending is so sad though but very right atcha .. this is a very powerful sad piece.. great job

vampyress Jenni


Re: Momas boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 09:44:48 AM AEST
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Sinned, your beautiful work never ceases to amaze me. The rythem of this poem took me deeper into the theme and beautifuly structured stanzas, you knew exactly how this write would turn out before it was on paper. It tells a sad story that I became very attached to while reading. Wonderful job.

As always,
Keep writing
Keep smiling

sweetstranger




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