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When you look at me
your eyes tell me so much
The look on your face
shows how you hunger, for my touch

This creates such a desire for me
to hold you in my arms
Just a little more magic
and one of your many charms

How lucky did I get
the day that I met you
This was very special
and I immediately knew

That I had found a love
as good as you could get
A day to remember
and never possibly forget

To spend the rest of my life with you
is now my greatest desire
This would make me, as happy as I could be
and in this life, all that I require [comments] => 8 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

When You Look At Me

Contributed by bruce on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 11:21:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When You Look At Me

When you look at me
your eyes tell me so much
The look on your face
shows how you hunger, for my touch

This creates such a desire for me
to hold you in my arms
Just a little more magic
and one of your many charms

How lucky did I get
the day that I met you
This was very special
and I immediately knew

That I had found a love
as good as you could get
A day to remember
and never possibly forget

To spend the rest of my life with you
is now my greatest desire
This would make me, as happy as I could be
and in this life, all that I require

Copyright © bruce ... [ 2007-07-03 23:21:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Poess on Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 01:42:56 AM AEST
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Why can't I find someone like you???
:)
Great poem. I love your writing style, simple yet completely effective. BEAUTIFUL writing!

Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 02:57:27 AM AEST
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a very deep emotional dedicated write.. you can feel the love and devotion in this.. very well worded great job

Vampyress Jenni

Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 04:22:44 PM AEST
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this is very precious writing.
Go bruce.
Huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:41:13 AM AEST
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absoluely beautiful
You sure know how to write about love
great job :)

Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:35:04 AM AEST
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so beautiful and sweet!

hugs n' love nessa

roses

Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:52:56 AM AEST
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Innocently sincere and stunningly beautifu . . .

Ben

Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:09:32 AM AEST
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Dear Bruce, this was a sensational "first" post to your immediately
following one. They go hand in hand as much as you and your
very lucky and special lady.

Truly remarkable to find someone that can hold our heart without
breaking it. I'm very happy that you seem to have done just that.

Beautiful, beautiful piece.

~Breezy : )

Re: When You Look At Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:13:16 AM AEST
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I can feel the desire and romance brewing within this write, woooooo hoooooooo a delightful and romantic piece you put down here to share with all of us once again!

Michelle

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