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[sid] => 13571
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Relaxing
[time] => 2003-03-01 15:00:00
[hometext] => Another old one...
[bodytext] => The washing is waiting now to be hung
I have breakfast dishes still to be done
Must swing the mop over these floors,
Even maybe wipe the cupboard doors
The bathroom is a mess, looks full of mud
Oh, I’ll need extra elbow grease on that tub
Remains from yesterdays little fishing trip
Editors note: next time find a sandy place you drip!!
So now I’m wasting my time sitting at the pc
Trying to write down some rough poetry
And really I guess I had better get off my....
Where? … and go and get a few things done
Have still to get outside and mow those lawns
I’ll even dig out a few of those blasted thorns
Lastly the children would like to get to the beach
Eventually; all I’d like, is to find a comfy seat!!
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Relaxing.
Mick Puttock
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => FamilyPoems
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Relaxing
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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The washing is waiting now to be hung
I have breakfast dishes still to be done
Must swing the mop over these floors,
Even maybe wipe the cupboard doors
The bathroom is a mess, looks full of mud
Oh, I’ll need extra elbow grease on that tub
Remains from yesterdays little fishing trip
Editors note: next time find a sandy place you drip!!
So now I’m wasting my time sitting at the pc
Trying to write down some rough poetry
And really I guess I had better get off my....
Where? … and go and get a few things done
Have still to get outside and mow those lawns
I’ll even dig out a few of those blasted thorns
Lastly the children would like to get to the beach
Eventually; all I’d like, is to find a comfy seat!!
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.
.
Relaxing.
Mick Puttock
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Mick_Puttock
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2003-03-01 15:00:00]
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Re: Relaxing
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:39:35 PM AEST
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old things sometimes need to be rerun as this poem. A very good write I enjoyed it.
Sharon |
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Re: Relaxing
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by kangarose on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:40:11 PM AEST
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| great write mick as always like the editors note too :D |
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Re: Relaxing
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:39:51 AM AEST
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| I so loved this one Mick Nice to see you posting on your site! Great one I will have to post this on my frig! So I can rest awhile!Christina |
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Re: Relaxing
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:35:20 PM AEST
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oh isn't life great, always 10 things to do, and enough time to do 7.
Great write. I enjoyed it
Jeff |
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Re: Relaxing
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 10:29:43 PM AEST
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| ahhhh this is cute, makes me looks towards the nice spring and better weather, i've had quite enough of winter i do believe, or am i totally mad as im look forward to spring cleaning now lol huggs and love to you and yours, always nessa |
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Re: Relaxing
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 01:19:06 AM AEST
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Enjoyed this again.... I'm glad to see you posting again....
NOW..time to start WRITING again.... :>)
Hugs...
Jen |
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Re: Relaxing
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by riverofwords on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 05:29:47 AM AEST
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very enjoyable write reminds me to rest awhile ..i cant ..dishes are piling up ...
great one
keep on writing
peace be your journey
Terry
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Re: Relaxing
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 07:30:54 PM AEST
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relax????????? Whats that??????????? Come on the chores need to be done!!!!!!!!
fun write to read!!
mckayla |
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Re: Relaxing
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by norm on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:38:34 PM AEST
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You put it correctly. It sure tells poetically
our life's busy-ness.......
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Re: Relaxing
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:46:15 AM AEST
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Im just getting to reading your work. Well done.l I know the feeling.
Michelle |
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Re: Relaxing
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:05:40 AM AEST
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| This is a very good write...I'm going to read your other ones too :-) |
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Re: Relaxing
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 05:30:31 AM AEST
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| you have captured this well... i can see it... blessings... michele |
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Re: Relaxing
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by norm on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 10:49:23 AM AEST
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This poem's a poem indeed
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I'm now a wee bit older
not necessarily wiser,
I thought Mick was a guy,
I would suggest Pfiser..
Now it might be that
Flowers are faster
Love someone to tell me
The sex of Webmaster...
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Re: Relaxing
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:16:57 AM AEST
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this made me smile - sounds like my house LOL
merry |
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Re: Relaxing
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 05:05:30 PM AEST
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hi mick,
this is very real and good at the same time.
you sound like a father that truely care for his family.
i like this. |
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Re: Relaxing
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by venkat on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 06:44:25 AM AEST
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..well organised thoughts...well arranged words..good sequences..shows your talent as a great poet..you have done it with wonderful ease sir.best wishes always
sincerely.. venkat
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Re: Relaxing
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by Manicmuze on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:49:22 PM AEST
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Very entertaining poem, its real and has universal appeal. Enjoyed reading this, well done.
~ Wendy |
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Re: Relaxing
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:31:12 AM AEST
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| Well done sir,..this is quite refreshing..I liked the way how you used the words in such a moulding. K |
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Re: Relaxing
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:07:33 PM AEST
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Ahhh, I've read this one a few times.
I know what it's like. I've got three children running around. It's fun isn't it? *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Relaxing
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by cant-skate on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 06:19:13 AM AEST
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| thats gr8 as always :) ! |
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