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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
[time] => 2007-07-04 14:18:24
[hometext] => Self explanatory
[bodytext] =>
SultryRose's Signatures
When we touch souls, troubles fade.
You make me feel like a priceless jade.
You light a flame beyond compare.
Such passions we eternally share.
We dance to the music alnight
Alone in glimmering candle light.
I'm just melting in your arms.
You sway me with magnetic charms.
Melting in your strong arms.
We've never touched but our souls do.
Just wonna eternally slow dance with you.
Wonna snuggle entwined together.
Our luv rocks in stromy weather.
No one else can move me this way.
Can melt into you any ole day.
Only distence can keep us a part
But I only luv you sweet heart.
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 373
[topic] => 34
[informant] => emystar
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 34
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 11:58:58 PM AEST
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| WOW; Just beautiful |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:30:02 AM AEST
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Lovely write, Emy. Slow dancing is soooooo sweet with someone who can melt you. *smiles*
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:38:09 AM AEST
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awww what a beautiful write
you did great
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 05:07:03 AM AEST
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Great piece of poetry.
I kinda got confused on how I should read it
I thought maybe a comma over here might make it seem good.
When we touch souls, all troubles fade.
You make me feel like a priceless jade.
Ah its your work.
I am not at the liberty to change it.
Just throwing it out there :) |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:17:08 AM AEST
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oh emy this is so romantic and sweet! beautifully written!
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:47:12 AM AEST
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What a day for a coming back and reading what is an absolute treasure and sight for saw eyes . . . happy 4th and it be ever so humble lol.
((((((emy))))))
Ben |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:03:39 AM AEST
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wow marvelous.. this is such a beautiful and passionate write.. you can feel the love.. very well composed..
vampyress jenni |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:53:43 PM AEST
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makes me melt just reading it so lovely
Michelle |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:58:43 AM AEST
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emy, you ole softie!! ; )
Damn woman! This transported me into the most ethereal
and beautiful dream ... *siiiiiiiigh*
I welcome these emotions and embrace these moments
with all I am. Thank you for sharing this. It's stunning, hun.
*raises a glass to slow dancin'*
~Breezy |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by Spike on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 11:11:47 PM AEST
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Emy, a lovely romantic declaration. The perfect rhyme scheme was a little heavy, though -maybe some half-rhymes at the end of the lines would make the expression a bit smoother. Lots of wonderful images and teases.
S. |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 08:26:49 AM AEST
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| What an excellent write. Tender as the strings softly stroked on a harp. A flute with the pitch of perfection and melody of a butterfly drifting in air. Just plain passion, perfect poetic genius. |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 12:45:32 AM AEST
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ooh
I'm melting....
you know I love slow dancing,
come to me
and
lets snuggle. |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by Dom on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 04:45:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic write hun, with sensual imagery.
Lovely,
Dom |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by veenu on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 12:43:58 AM AEST
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| nice pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and loved melting in your poem..............................veenu |
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Re: MELTING IN YOUR ARMS
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 06:11:29 PM AEST
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Your words painted a vivid picture, you set the atmosphere very nicely.
Take care,
David |
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