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Array ( [sid] => 135770 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where Tinkerbell Now Burn's In Hell . . . Ben [time] => 2007-07-06 17:29:54 [hometext] => Contrary to beliefe i to have visited the a** end of love more times than i can or am allowed to talk about, only difference is i survied the smell, as in steped in you know what and came out smelling like a rose. As i often said, i wasn't born married. [bodytext] =>




Meet me

in a fantasy

and we shall run away,

where sunsets go to dream at night

and dance alone by

day.


Where lovers drift

to parts unknown engaging in romance,

down little streets of cobblestone

here in the south of

france.


A taste of wine

an ocean view perhaps in time

a taste of

you,

lost within a fairytale

a place that's free from pain,

together in a boat we'll sail

amidst the pouring

rain.


Enchanted by the things we know

seduced by what we see, like peter pan

we'll never grow

in love

we'll always

be.


Oh good christ

one day we'll find when often

it's to

late,

we've paye'd the price to lose our mind

in opening hell's

gate.


For is love not a fantasy?

design to be a lie,

hidden in a woman's womb

beyond the naked

eye.


A prouduct of a process

tainted with corruption, a tragic joke

that with one stroke

spew's it's sick

eruption.


Yes meet me in a fantasy

that place of sweet pretend,

where tinkerbell now burn's in hell

and god has met his

end.


Ben [comments] => 4 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 21 [informant] => myheartsvoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Where Tinkerbell Now Burn's In Hell . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 05:29:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems








Meet me

in a fantasy

and we shall run away,

where sunsets go to dream at night

and dance alone by

day.


Where lovers drift

to parts unknown engaging in romance,

down little streets of cobblestone

here in the south of

france.


A taste of wine

an ocean view perhaps in time

a taste of

you,

lost within a fairytale

a place that's free from pain,

together in a boat we'll sail

amidst the pouring

rain.


Enchanted by the things we know

seduced by what we see, like peter pan

we'll never grow

in love

we'll always

be.


Oh good christ

one day we'll find when often

it's to

late,

we've paye'd the price to lose our mind

in opening hell's

gate.


For is love not a fantasy?

design to be a lie,

hidden in a woman's womb

beyond the naked

eye.


A prouduct of a process

tainted with corruption, a tragic joke

that with one stroke

spew's it's sick

eruption.


Yes meet me in a fantasy

that place of sweet pretend,

where tinkerbell now burn's in hell

and god has met his

end.


Ben




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Re: Where Tinkerbell Now Burn's In Hell . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 02:39:44 AM AEST
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thanks for all your comments on my work also.

this is a marvelous passionate in your face piece here.. well written.

vampyress Jenni


Re: Where Tinkerbell Now Burn's In Hell . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:07:57 AM AEST
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Damn, man....that is one fine piece of writing. Very edgy and raw. I love your romance writes (you know I do) but when you pen something like this, my mouth just drops....it's like brother damn....you are a fine writer of life and it's travels. Thank you, Ben for being who you are and sharing your wonderful talent.

Much peace,
Laura


Re: Where Tinkerbell Now Burn's In Hell . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 07:31:21 AM AEST
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Well, this certainly took me for a ride...at 1st I felt as if we were boarding the DreamWeaver Train to cross the highways of fantasy...only to find the destination in flames...

what a trip...

BigLoveMuchPeace
~cavegirlme


Re: Where Tinkerbell Now Burn's In Hell . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 02:42:24 PM AEST
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This has deepened the writings of the love poet to yet another depth....I read more in here than one can see with the naked eye.

A prouduct of a process

tainted with corruption, a tragic joke

that with one stroke

spew's it's sick

eruption.

Questions?
Hidden feelings?
Hmm?
Great write.
Showing some insight to loves complexities?




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