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Array ( [sid] => 135959 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Marching Orders [time] => 2007-07-14 10:22:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The flag goes with the foul landscape
and our jargon muffles the drum.
In the greatest cities we nuture
the most cynical prostitution
and massacre logical revolts.

In this spicy and drenched land
we feed the need
for monsterous exploitations,
industrial or military.

Farewell then.. no matter where-
many are the conscripts of good will;
though ours continues, a ferocious philosophy.

Ignorant and rabid, we dance..
so let us let the rest of the world know:
'Change is the real advance'..

"Marching orders! Let's go!"

B
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Marching Orders

Contributed by Man_On_High on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:22:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Patriotic

The flag goes with the foul landscape
and our jargon muffles the drum.
In the greatest cities we nuture
the most cynical prostitution
and massacre logical revolts.

In this spicy and drenched land
we feed the need
for monsterous exploitations,
industrial or military.

Farewell then.. no matter where-
many are the conscripts of good will;
though ours continues, a ferocious philosophy.

Ignorant and rabid, we dance..
so let us let the rest of the world know:
'Change is the real advance'..

"Marching orders! Let's go!"

B

Copyright © Man_On_High ... [ 2007-07-14 10:22:06]
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Re: Marching Orders (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:35:43 AM AEST
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Very creative writing, my friend.
huggs,
emy`

Re: Marching Orders (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 11:03:23 AM AEST
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Billy,

the beginning started so strong and carried the entire poem along, I loved this and agree with Em very creative.

Michelle

Re: Marching Orders (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 02:36:07 PM AEST
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I expect nothing less from you Billy . :)
This is very awsome piece very creative .
We miss your poetry here.
Don't be a stranger :)

hugs

Re: Marching Orders (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 03:16:59 AM AEST
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Plagerism!
Billy you are a fraud!!!

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