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Array ( [sid] => 135988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losing My Mind [time] => 2007-07-15 19:16:30 [hometext] => Please Comment! I really need feedback! [bodytext] => Twisting&Turning
i'm losing my Mind,
Why can't I forget what
we left behind?
I'm pushing so hard,
but the thoughts
won't go,
Ican't keep my mind
still and why
I don't know..

Unanswered questions
float in my head
i'm trying to
remember
A Love that's
now DeaD,

All of the
Ki$$e$,
All of the Lies,
All the HeartBreak,
All the Tears i've cried,
but i'm still dizzy
and i'm still
Missing
You,& My
Heart
is still
BROKEN
after what
"WE"
put it through..................

PePPerMint Ki$$e$ 2007 [comments] => 9 [counter] => 385 [topic] => 48 [informant] => InfinitePoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Losing My Mind

Contributed by InfinitePoet on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 07:16:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Twisting&Turning
i'm losing my Mind,
Why can't I forget what
we left behind?
I'm pushing so hard,
but the thoughts
won't go,
Ican't keep my mind
still and why
I don't know..

Unanswered questions
float in my head
i'm trying to
remember
A Love that's
now DeaD,

All of the
Ki$$e$,
All of the Lies,
All the HeartBreak,
All the Tears i've cried,
but i'm still dizzy
and i'm still
Missing
You,& My
Heart
is still
BROKEN
after what
"WE"
put it through..................

PePPerMint Ki$$e$ 2007

Copyright © InfinitePoet ... [ 2007-07-15 19:16:30]
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Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 10:13:27 PM AEST
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Sometimes the hardest thing we can do is let go of the past so we can fully appreciate the present...you expressed yourself well here

NS

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface09 on Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 10:26:36 PM AEST
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is never easy to forget a love that is so strong...and it is not easy to even stop thinking...
good luck..time will eventually make u a better person...
thanks for sharing this poem...

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by runawaynameless on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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I loved this. Maybe because I feel this way myself.

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Tot on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:23:20 AM AEST
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we are all pieces of the life that we have lived...I think broken hearts never truly heal...perhaps we stick a bandaid on them, brush off and forge ahead in life...:) Loved the poem~ Tot

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:23:31 AM AEST
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wonderfully flowing expression of feeling, keep fine tuning your talent:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Thespia on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 06:35:49 AM AEST
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Cool poem, it flows so naturally with deep emotion. Good write!

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 06:54:02 AM AEST
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Everyone can relate
Its never easy to forget a great love
but like they say "time heals everything"
we just have to be patient
Thanks for sharing
Best wishes
~Bluestars~

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 04:31:22 AM AEST
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this is very sad but well expressed.. It is hard to get over things sometimes.. perhaps you feel that there wasn't clsoure or that something is unfinished. but this is a very good write with the expression of heartbreak.. good job

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Losing My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:30:25 PM AEST
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your finest write in my opinion. it was passionate and well put together. great work.

-Phil

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