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Array ( [sid] => 136023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fragmented [time] => 2007-07-17 08:18:57 [hometext] => first poem I've posted in quite a while, comments welcome [bodytext] => These days are hard,
The hours long.
All the hope
Is long since gone.

The fragments of
A mirror shattered
Reflect my thoughts,
Confused and scattered.

Fragmented, my
Reflection laughs
At all the questions
My mind asks.

Why here? why now?
Why lost not found?
Why by these fears
Am I still bound?

Unsure of what
Is next to come
Now that my dreams
Have been undone.

Exhausted heart,
I lie here still.
I cannot move,
I've not the will.
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Fragmented

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 08:18:57 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



These days are hard,
The hours long.
All the hope
Is long since gone.

The fragments of
A mirror shattered
Reflect my thoughts,
Confused and scattered.

Fragmented, my
Reflection laughs
At all the questions
My mind asks.

Why here? why now?
Why lost not found?
Why by these fears
Am I still bound?

Unsure of what
Is next to come
Now that my dreams
Have been undone.

Exhausted heart,
I lie here still.
I cannot move,
I've not the will.




Copyright © xXxmegsxXx ... [ 2007-07-17 08:18:57]
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Re: Fragmented (User Rating: 1 )
by tearstained_soul on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 08:50:23 AM AEST
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it's a very well written poem, it just seems... unfinished


Re: Fragmented (User Rating: 1 )
by yackerz85 on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 01:29:37 AM AEST
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You wrote this poem very well... yet it lacks resolve... perhaps you'll find your answers and have a definitive conclusion




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