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everything you've worked for
the one person you can't live without

you can't go back and change what you've done
you can't help but cry when you look at her
you can't stop thinking.. when will i wake from this nightmare

there's nothing left to do but sit back and take what life throws out at you
just hope she'll be there by your side when things are at its toughest.

learn from your mistakes
show her you'll do anything to make things all better
that without her you're hopeless

things will be fine.. and love will continue and grow stronger.
never stop telling her you're sorry.. never stop telling her you love her.
love her til death..

to have and to hold
from this day forward
for better.. for worse..
for richer.. for poorer..
in sickness or in health
to love and to cherish 'till death do us part

I pledge to you my faithfulness and life.
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this is my vow

Contributed by spookz570 on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 10:17:02 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

with one blink it can all be gone
everything you've worked for
the one person you can't live without

you can't go back and change what you've done
you can't help but cry when you look at her
you can't stop thinking.. when will i wake from this nightmare

there's nothing left to do but sit back and take what life throws out at you
just hope she'll be there by your side when things are at its toughest.

learn from your mistakes
show her you'll do anything to make things all better
that without her you're hopeless

things will be fine.. and love will continue and grow stronger.
never stop telling her you're sorry.. never stop telling her you love her.
love her til death..

to have and to hold
from this day forward
for better.. for worse..
for richer.. for poorer..
in sickness or in health
to love and to cherish 'till death do us part

I pledge to you my faithfulness and life.

Copyright © spookz570 ... [ 2007-07-17 10:17:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: this is my vow (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 01:20:31 PM AEST
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WoW! Your words made me feel such an urgency,to do right and such remorse and regret and self destruction going on inside,well at least that was mu interpretation! Very good write,keep them flowing especially in times of desperation and being on that last thread of sanity,keep picking up that pen it will be your greatest outlet ever even if you dont realize it till yaers from now......................*PePPerMint Ki$$e$*

Re: this is my vow (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:20:05 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful right and yes everyone should learn from mistakes.. I know a few people myself who should feel this way.. and you protrayed the feeling of regret and remorse very wonderfully.. marvelous job here!!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

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