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Array ( [sid] => 136053 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => FIRST TIME [time] => 2007-07-18 12:23:52 [hometext] => NOT SURE THIS ONE IS DONE BUT HERE IS THE START I GUESS [bodytext] =>
TONIGHTS THE NIGHT WE MAKE LOVE

JUST TAKE MY HAND

LET ME LEAD YOU INTO TEMPTATION

LET ALL THINGS GO AS YOU WALK THREW THE DOOR

DON'T THINK OF ANYTHING

RELAX YOUR MIND

NO WORRIES

NO THOUGHTS

JUST YOU AND ME

ONE WITH EACH OTHERS THOUGHTS

ONE WITH EACH OTHERS FEELINGS

WE LIVE AS ONE

YOU ARE ME AND I AM YOU

TOGETHER WE ARE WHOLE ONCE AGAIN

SEPERATED BY BIRTH AND LIFETIMES LOST

NOW BROUGHT TOGETHER ONCE AGAIN

TO SHOW ONE ANOTHER HOW TO LIVE AGAIN

HOW TO LOVE AGAIN

HOW TO COMBINE OUR THOUGHTS,WANTS,NEEDS AND EMOTIONS

NO MORE THOUGHTLESS NIGHTS AND SPEECHLESS MORNINGS

JUST ME AND YOU AND THE MORNING DEW
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FIRST TIME

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:23:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

TONIGHTS THE NIGHT WE MAKE LOVE

JUST TAKE MY HAND

LET ME LEAD YOU INTO TEMPTATION

LET ALL THINGS GO AS YOU WALK THREW THE DOOR

DON'T THINK OF ANYTHING

RELAX YOUR MIND

NO WORRIES

NO THOUGHTS

JUST YOU AND ME

ONE WITH EACH OTHERS THOUGHTS

ONE WITH EACH OTHERS FEELINGS

WE LIVE AS ONE

YOU ARE ME AND I AM YOU

TOGETHER WE ARE WHOLE ONCE AGAIN

SEPERATED BY BIRTH AND LIFETIMES LOST

NOW BROUGHT TOGETHER ONCE AGAIN

TO SHOW ONE ANOTHER HOW TO LIVE AGAIN

HOW TO LOVE AGAIN

HOW TO COMBINE OUR THOUGHTS,WANTS,NEEDS AND EMOTIONS

NO MORE THOUGHTLESS NIGHTS AND SPEECHLESS MORNINGS

JUST ME AND YOU AND THE MORNING DEW

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-07-18 12:23:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: FIRST TIME (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:50:14 PM AEST
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Beautifully written work of art.
Awesome!
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: FIRST TIME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:45:42 AM AEST
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This has got be true love. The way you write about it you must be in a dizzy state Good luck from bern.

Re: FIRST TIME (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 12:39:18 AM AEST
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first time. is it meant to be in love the first time
to take the one and lead into bliss for the first time
to make it all become and more the first time
to beleive and never end. yes, you are in love. stay that way. never stop no matter what life throws in front of you. beauty in this write, they must be just that

endless

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