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Array ( [sid] => 136059 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The last supper... [time] => 2007-07-18 18:44:14 [hometext] => Its funny how 'But I love you' can mean so much pain when its said as 'I love you but'.... [bodytext] => You have finally spoken
You let me heart broken...
Said its over I don't love you no more...
The pain is too much aint walkin that lane anymore,

But tell me where did I go wrong?
This pain I cant endure any long...
Tell me how do I save my life...
Im in sadness, dont want no more strife...

Begging on my knees...
Asking you for one last dinner...
Whats there for you to lose?
how much more can i let you bruise?

I know I am no one to make you wait
If you have someone else, I still debate...
yet we talk, you still care...
Just unable to erase those memories we share....

Let us meet for a final goodbye
Keep an open mind babes, give it one last try
Mistakes are what we learn from
But I will never learn to say goodbye! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 48 [informant] => madhusudan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The last supper...

Contributed by madhusudan on Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 06:44:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You have finally spoken
You let me heart broken...
Said its over I don't love you no more...
The pain is too much aint walkin that lane anymore,

But tell me where did I go wrong?
This pain I cant endure any long...
Tell me how do I save my life...
Im in sadness, dont want no more strife...

Begging on my knees...
Asking you for one last dinner...
Whats there for you to lose?
how much more can i let you bruise?

I know I am no one to make you wait
If you have someone else, I still debate...
yet we talk, you still care...
Just unable to erase those memories we share....

Let us meet for a final goodbye
Keep an open mind babes, give it one last try
Mistakes are what we learn from
But I will never learn to say goodbye!

Copyright © madhusudan ... [ 2007-07-18 18:44:14]
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Re: The last supper... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:28:13 AM AEST
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oh my, that last line is immense!

There is much emotion in this and I feel a certain familiar ache that I"m positive
MANY have also been akin to. Sad and forlorn, but damn, what exhilaration in
having been, you know?

I think the heart is impossible sometimes ... holding on to every last shread
in hopes that the inevitable won't befall it. *sigh*

Small thought ... I'll Pm you with.

~Breezy

Re: The last supper... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:37:45 AM AEST
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At least you can say I have been loved. If for only a short time it was for real. Think how many cannot say that and you will smile and move on to the next adventure. Perhaps the real big one in your life. Greetings from bern

Re: The last supper... (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:49:17 AM AEST
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This is a very sad poem. I know how that can be.
keep writing and i will read.
very good job.

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