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Array ( [sid] => 13630 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Scar [time] => 2003-03-02 18:40:00 [hometext] => about something that happened a month or so ago... [bodytext] => The dark purple scar is beautiful
When I think of the blood that it dripped
That dark moment of suicide dreams
The blood on my finger tips
I know I'm diseased and I no longer care
What words come from your lips
The razor's too strong and I'm too weak
To stay strong during one of my fits

The cuts on my thighs are so pretty
When I think of the pain that they eased
I think of the times that you left me behind
While I was still down on my knees
Sobbing that night huddled down on the floor
Shaking to beat the disease
Crying to God just to take my life now
But He didn't answer my pleas

The dark purple scar is so gorgeous
With all the things it implied
At night I touch the purple welts
The razor by my side
I don't want to be a statistic
I want to lead a life
But I'm afraid that I'll give in to the siren song
Of being a suicide

[comments] => 7 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Blue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Scar

Contributed by Blue on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The dark purple scar is beautiful
When I think of the blood that it dripped
That dark moment of suicide dreams
The blood on my finger tips
I know I'm diseased and I no longer care
What words come from your lips
The razor's too strong and I'm too weak
To stay strong during one of my fits

The cuts on my thighs are so pretty
When I think of the pain that they eased
I think of the times that you left me behind
While I was still down on my knees
Sobbing that night huddled down on the floor
Shaking to beat the disease
Crying to God just to take my life now
But He didn't answer my pleas

The dark purple scar is so gorgeous
With all the things it implied
At night I touch the purple welts
The razor by my side
I don't want to be a statistic
I want to lead a life
But I'm afraid that I'll give in to the siren song
Of being a suicide

Copyright © Blue ... [ 2003-03-02 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Scar (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:17:16 PM AEST
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sad but not worth dieing for,,no one is,,a friend in words,,spooky

Re: The Scar (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 11:16:06 PM AEST
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Beautifully written..but so sad... Hope things are better now....
Jenni

Re: The Scar (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:39:33 PM AEST
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this is stunning...a beautiful poem...please don't die, im me if you want, don't die...

Re: The Scar (User Rating: 1 )
by chantel on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 05:12:12 PM AEST
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very sad but i know where u are coming from it is not worth it todays troubles are tommorows memories and that is all they will be memories so stay alive so we can read ur butifull poetry
chantel

Re: The Scar (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 12:22:18 PM AEST
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Very vivid relate to this I can
I think of the times that you left me behind
While I was still down on my knees
Sobbing that night huddled down on the floor
I love those 3 lines, your poem is beautiful in its sadness.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Scar (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 01:27:29 PM AEST
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Please dont do anything to yourself. I just had one of my best friends kill himself. you dont know how much pain that that has brought on. Not only for his family but also all of his friends. If you need to talk i am here im me or e-mail me lollypopkid2005@hotmail.com Lolly

Re: The Scar (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:57:23 PM AEST
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(((BLUE))) First...I love the poem, the way everything comes together, so beautifully...you have a great talent
Secondly...I know exactly how you feel and I know how much I've plead to be taken away from all of this, and just how it feels when that plea is ignored...
I know I'm not in the ebst position right now to say that I am always here for you if you need to talk, but I consider you a friend, so please... if you ever need a friend, I'll be that person...Remember I can relate... I've been there too
E-mail: ILuVmYDickies19@aol.com

Your friend,
Lindsey

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