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Array ( [sid] => 136505 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams can't come true, but life can [time] => 2007-08-05 10:48:02 [hometext] => don't like it as much as my last one, but, what the hey [bodytext] => Stars fall above me
as I close my eyes and wish
and dream
of life without stress
without no hope
without
tears
and wonder why life
even exists
and then I stand up
and go home
to the world I live in
where life is on a timer
and time is on a schedule
and love
is all we have
and wonder if my dream world
the one I visit under black sky and stars
even is real
then a hug
something simple
something known
breaks my thoughts
and takes me away from my dreams
OF the unknown
and I wonder why
I ever thought life should'nt be real
and my life just be a dream
inside my deams right now
because even if my dream is perfect
even if I can run from my fears
even if i can
make up anything I feel
There is no real love
theres no hands
to stop me from running
theres none
to make me feel
So the next time
I lie under falling stars
I don't close my eyes and deam
I stand up and dance
becaus even if I fall
I'll be real
and then next time
I'll take you with me


By: Jayne Barkman


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Jay_ne3 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Dreams can't come true, but life can

Contributed by Jay_ne3 on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 10:48:02 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Stars fall above me
as I close my eyes and wish
and dream
of life without stress
without no hope
without
tears
and wonder why life
even exists
and then I stand up
and go home
to the world I live in
where life is on a timer
and time is on a schedule
and love
is all we have
and wonder if my dream world
the one I visit under black sky and stars
even is real
then a hug
something simple
something known
breaks my thoughts
and takes me away from my dreams
OF the unknown
and I wonder why
I ever thought life should'nt be real
and my life just be a dream
inside my deams right now
because even if my dream is perfect
even if I can run from my fears
even if i can
make up anything I feel
There is no real love
theres no hands
to stop me from running
theres none
to make me feel
So the next time
I lie under falling stars
I don't close my eyes and deam
I stand up and dance
becaus even if I fall
I'll be real
and then next time
I'll take you with me


By: Jayne Barkman






Copyright © Jay_ne3 ... [ 2007-08-05 10:48:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Dreams can't come true, but life can (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 12:22:15 PM AEST
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You write to the music of a beautifull carasel.
I really luv your work.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Dreams can't come true, but life can (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 10:53:18 PM AEST
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not a bad piece of work. its forward and to the point.


endless




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