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Array ( [sid] => 136633 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Muse [time] => 2007-08-10 08:21:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => All the time...


She's the painting, and the music and the rhyme


It's the same...


In the evening hours the river speaks her name


All is still...


I have loved her always, and I always will







She's the whisper in the darkness
and the giver of the light

She's the wind that moves the willow
and a shadow of the night

She's a star on the horizon
just before the break of dawn

and her spirit is the reason
I have strength to carry on....






It's the same...


In the evening hours the river speaks her name


All the time...


She's the painting, and the music and the rhyme


All is still...



I have loved her always, and I always will





L.Carling c2007
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The Muse

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 08:21:10 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



All the time...


She's the painting, and the music and the rhyme


It's the same...


In the evening hours the river speaks her name


All is still...


I have loved her always, and I always will







She's the whisper in the darkness
and the giver of the light

She's the wind that moves the willow
and a shadow of the night

She's a star on the horizon
just before the break of dawn

and her spirit is the reason
I have strength to carry on....






It's the same...


In the evening hours the river speaks her name


All the time...


She's the painting, and the music and the rhyme


All is still...



I have loved her always, and I always will





L.Carling c2007




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Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 03:46:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Larry...... this swept me away , lovely

Michelle


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Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 11:09:45 PM AEST
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Your words are so softly beautiful, and the descriptions so vivid they breathe. I really like the idea of her being the force behind things, not simply the thing itself. It heightens the strength and uniqueness of the love.

A truly wonderful read!

Dom


Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 11:22:49 AM AEST
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Very nice, Larry. Soft yet potent - perhaps you have an actual inspiration on this plane or are speaking more generically? Either way, tribute poetry is perhaps a more apt category, but the joy of ideas and epiphanies at 2 am, the sense of wonder at the creation and the awe regarding the spark that birthed it, the inspirations that surround us and the motivation it calls up, is as close to love as it gets.

A warming read, quite lovely.

Spike


Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 01:42:12 AM AEST
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Larry, my friend ... this is just too damn beautiful. Such a
gorgeous display of emotion in words ...

There is a sentiment in this that I find absolute. And it is most refreshing. A love that stands the test of time.
One that is everlasting, (even through loss, pain, hardship) . . . it endures. And it never loses potency, but
only grows more intense with the passing of ages and turning of pages.

Damn fine poetry. The beauty in this could make an angel pause to sigh ~

gorgeous

~Breezy


Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th August 2007 @ 09:40:06 AM AEST
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Hey Larry, yeah it's been awhile. Glad to see you are still penning such wonderful writes.

Have a beer (or three) on me,

Mike


Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 02:15:20 PM AEST
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Larry~
Gorgeous, beautiful and ever so romantic.
I have always loved your writings my dear friend. You make your reader all mushy and soft on the inside, lol. I have come to expect nothing but the best from you and yes I must say you can always deliver the most outstanding masterpieces any given time~ Roses at your friend my dear poet friend.
love & warm hugs,
dreamer


Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 01:57:04 AM AEST
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A well woven wording my dear friend.

Barkeep, this rounds on me.

as always,
wordsy.


Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 11:50:47 AM AEST
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Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 12:08:40 PM AEST
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i love your layout and style here larry, this is a truly beautiful poem, keep 'em coming, i and so many, never tire of reading your glorious poetry:)

hugs n' love nessa


Re: The Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 2nd October 2007 @ 03:02:43 AM AEST
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very nicely done...

wiz




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