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Array ( [sid] => 136760 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Turn To Hang. [time] => 2007-08-16 02:57:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
I told you things..

so many truths,

never said in such ways before..

things that wrenched the very heart
of which they were born..

drenched the lips
of which they poured...

i discarded my pride
so that you could see truth.

gods honest truth.

Im always hanging...
am i not?

never knowing, how you feel..
about how i feel..

like your hiding..
but i hide nothing.

i am nothing but a lonely seeker..

but
are 'no' words.....
really better than your words?

ill never know... youll never tell me.

and so i hang..

i hang on.

But when will you start hanging.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 13 [informant] => GemmaLouiseRose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Your Turn To Hang.

Contributed by GemmaLouiseRose on Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 02:57:50 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I told you things..

so many truths,

never said in such ways before..

things that wrenched the very heart
of which they were born..

drenched the lips
of which they poured...

i discarded my pride
so that you could see truth.

gods honest truth.

Im always hanging...
am i not?

never knowing, how you feel..
about how i feel..

like your hiding..
but i hide nothing.

i am nothing but a lonely seeker..

but
are 'no' words.....
really better than your words?

ill never know... youll never tell me.

and so i hang..

i hang on.

But when will you start hanging.

Copyright © GemmaLouiseRose ... [ 2007-08-16 02:57:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your Turn To Hang. (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 04:23:49 AM AEST
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I like it alot. I know what it's like far too well. Very nicely expressed.

Re: Your Turn To Hang. (User Rating: 1 )
by Torn_Thomas on Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 04:42:33 AM AEST
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a beautiful pool of regret and emotion! wonderful.

Thomas

Re: Your Turn To Hang. (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 11:56:42 AM AEST
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i wanted to check out your work and i had a feeling it would pay off, this is devistatingly
honest, and inescapable to whom ever it was aimed at. i love the way it slowly unfolds
into a interogative stand off.

Ben

Re: Your Turn To Hang. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:28:41 AM AEST
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Great poem, yet it happens so much. Men never opening up to the one they love. Meanwhile the women tell all.

Re: Your Turn To Hang. (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 12:53:06 AM AEST
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As so often , I was drawn to this by the title.
I'm glad I was drawn, it held me throughout.
Nice write

Steve

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