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Array ( [sid] => 136859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untilted [time] => 2007-08-20 12:06:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I saw a girl standing there yesterday

i looked at her and she looked away

it made me wonder...what made her that way.

i hear she's been there for days waiting and waiting,

it must be the stars she's comtemplating..

i dont understand why she couldnt look me in the eye yet she kept her back straight and her head held high

it looked as though she was waiting to die, waiting for life to pass her by.

But today was different. her eyes met mine and sent a shiver up my spine

i realized if you look at her from the right angle behind her eyes you'll see angels

could it be the windows to heaven?

I didnt know what to do, i didnt want to move

what is it thats she's trying to prove?

nobody asked her to stand there, everyone told her to leave

but as sure as the sun will shine, she'll be there till she gets what she needs
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Leila18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Untilted

Contributed by Leila18 on Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 12:06:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I saw a girl standing there yesterday

i looked at her and she looked away

it made me wonder...what made her that way.

i hear she's been there for days waiting and waiting,

it must be the stars she's comtemplating..

i dont understand why she couldnt look me in the eye yet she kept her back straight and her head held high

it looked as though she was waiting to die, waiting for life to pass her by.

But today was different. her eyes met mine and sent a shiver up my spine

i realized if you look at her from the right angle behind her eyes you'll see angels

could it be the windows to heaven?

I didnt know what to do, i didnt want to move

what is it thats she's trying to prove?

nobody asked her to stand there, everyone told her to leave

but as sure as the sun will shine, she'll be there till she gets what she needs

Copyright © Leila18 ... [ 2007-08-20 12:06:35]
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Re: Untilted (User Rating: 1 )
by Neo-Theatre on Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 04:17:44 PM AEST
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Mick puttock has sex with his sister and pays a midget (with a cooked chicken dangling from one arm) to ejaculate on her breasts.

Why can't you understand this?
Delete my account.

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