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premonition

i did have about my destiny,

to full fruition love would bloom

somewhere at twenty

three.

'Twas

perhaps a wishful thought

as far as wishes go,

for how does one prepare them selves?

to love another

so.

I

was but a wanderer

akin to waisted

ease,

soon to meet the ponderer

who would take me to my

knees.

The

one who knew

the heart of me

in every small

detail,

soon

to

touch that part of me

a woman know's is

frail.

Oh!

and could she touch me now

with her intended way,

for more than just a visit

this women planned to

stay.

Her wanting eyes

and tender kiss were all

my heart could see,

enchanted by her fragile bliss

love saturated

me.

Ben

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Premonition . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 07:58:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A

premonition

i did have about my destiny,

to full fruition love would bloom

somewhere at twenty

three.

'Twas

perhaps a wishful thought

as far as wishes go,

for how does one prepare them selves?

to love another

so.

I

was but a wanderer

akin to waisted

ease,

soon to meet the ponderer

who would take me to my

knees.

The

one who knew

the heart of me

in every small

detail,

soon

to

touch that part of me

a woman know's is

frail.

Oh!

and could she touch me now

with her intended way,

for more than just a visit

this women planned to

stay.

Her wanting eyes

and tender kiss were all

my heart could see,

enchanted by her fragile bliss

love saturated

me.

Ben

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Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 11:21:17 AM AEST
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what a nice one too and to see that at 23 , just wow how my heart wants to see what yours did, but 5 yrs older maybe it will, just maybe. beauty and wonderdous write.

endless

Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 11:45:24 AM AEST
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The thought creates the reality truly speaks up here. Your thought of a wonderous love has manifested indeed. Well done my friends as always.

Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 12:16:02 PM AEST
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Another wonderful write Ben

Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 03:14:23 PM AEST
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Delightful read as always Ben.

I got your pm, I am fine just alot of crap going on...... Such is life but no need for you to worry

thanks for being you

Michelle

Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 01:41:33 AM AEST
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As usual, Beauifantasticalientexcellent! :) Your writing always brings some kind of feeling to my otherwise drab day at work :P

Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 07:07:46 AM AEST
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the thing about your poetry is that it is ever a wonder to read, to savor each message and thought... far lesser poets would be repetitive ~yet when reading you i never tire; for there is always a hope of heart and twinkle in the soul...

love n' hugs nessa

Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 08:25:40 AM AEST
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Another beautiful masterpiece
dripping with gorgeously woven
words from your beautiful loving
heart. I never tire from reading
your fantastic romantic writes
my dear friend. I'm always
guaranteed a smile visiting
your glorious pages. Well done
and thanks for sharing your
beautiful poetry with us.
huge hugs your fan,
dreamer

Re: Premonition . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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first i think the only way you can prepair yourself to love another is to love everyone. second great poem i like it i liked the form keep it up.
The Outlaw Poet

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