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Days are long and nights are lonely as I fight to struggle to survive in my troubled world
Time ticking so fast in my mind, like a time bomb ready to explode
Trying to hold for a hope, a hope in the madness of my mind.
Waiting for someone to rescue me in the deep sea of my sufferings.
Where are those people who should be there for me?
I couldn’t find any of them in this time of my despair.
Can someone spare a thought for a few minutes for me?
Have you played a deaf ear to hear my plea of help?

No one, nobody, nothing
Here I am in the tunnel of darkness, all alone
I am nothing in this miserable world
Dying in anguish where no one can see nor feel my sufferings and pain
I don’t ask you for pithiness only ask love and care that I needed most

It’s only God who can see everything
As I seek his mercy for my dying soul
This is the ending of a history of a person who is lonely with a tortured soul and
A broken spirit which is me

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All Alone

Contributed by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

All Alone

Days are long and nights are lonely as I fight to struggle to survive in my troubled world
Time ticking so fast in my mind, like a time bomb ready to explode
Trying to hold for a hope, a hope in the madness of my mind.
Waiting for someone to rescue me in the deep sea of my sufferings.
Where are those people who should be there for me?
I couldn’t find any of them in this time of my despair.
Can someone spare a thought for a few minutes for me?
Have you played a deaf ear to hear my plea of help?

No one, nobody, nothing
Here I am in the tunnel of darkness, all alone
I am nothing in this miserable world
Dying in anguish where no one can see nor feel my sufferings and pain
I don’t ask you for pithiness only ask love and care that I needed most

It’s only God who can see everything
As I seek his mercy for my dying soul
This is the ending of a history of a person who is lonely with a tortured soul and
A broken spirit which is me

Copyright Â© maria_mendonez_ibardolas ... [ 2003-03-04 09:00:00]
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Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:56:05 AM AEST
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This poem is so emotional, i know you say you don't want pity, but i'm very sorry you feel this way, but believe me, to someone, somewhere, you are more than nothing. 'Don't frown because someone, somewhere has fallen in love with your smile'. Amazing poem, keep it up xXx

Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:24:03 PM AEST
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despair seems to cloud most peoples minds... clouds that hide all that is joyous and good ... very deep writing hope you find the hope that is hidden by all the clouds of despair in you life

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